Love Thy Name Is Eternity

The Sun has just reached it's nest leaving the Earth in the twilight zone; evening sky is hovering above with a veil of gloomy pink colour, silhouettes of flying birds in the West only add to my melancholy, the lurking depression again trying to creep into my mind. But the sky above never lied to me; hundred of miles away from you, as I look at it in solitude, I can feel your every moments there; this evening sky tells me how was the day today for you... when you caressed the roses of your garden, or completed your last poem, when you smiled carelessly relishing our blissful moments; as for now,I can feel that with a deep sigh you are also looking at the pink sky there as if to share our moment of love; I must say again... 'Love thy name is Eternity.' =============================== By:kashinath karmakar (28th Jan.2011)
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Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2011 at 7:30 AM
ok, KAsh, I got your message way back there!! That was sweet of you. I remember when you said that after reading the other poem! So where is a new one from YOU?
Guzzi Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 10:00 AM
charming write here, the beginning of a courtship, please continue ..I long for more.. Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 1:49 PM
Kash, Yes, One Bloody Bastard was a reversed etheree. I had watched an episode of the Tudors where they cut poor people's heads off. King Henry 8 was HORRID.
Onclaud Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 12:00 PM
amazing panorama of the sky. kash! .. wow, naloko mo ko!! hahaha... pa tanong tanong pa dyan, hmp...lol! male , female or both??? soup mail me, gas pain na eh :) huggs, nette
Neels Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 10:15 PM
Another beauty Kashinath and so poignant. Good luck for the contest ;-) soupmail waiting for you ~ W
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 10:06 PM
ok, I'll go check soupmail now.
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 11:02 AM
sweet and thoroughly blissful, it ensures no poignancy. love is the name that is truly forever.. like God, because God is love. love, lightning ink.
Kendrick Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 4:45 AM
Good luck in the contest with this very creative work that reads like a sure winner..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 12:04 AM
Kashinath, guess what? I am up again to post another contest entry. Tried to do it "free" but it has a lyrical quality I simply can't get rid of. Yes, Indelible is true story. Truly "indelible" it was! See ya later, G (haha)
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 3:52 PM
wow, a beautiful wonderful concept for this challenge, Kashinath. Impressive writing. Just a head's up. The contest says 12 lines. So go thru it and lengthen lines or whatever you have to do to make it fit the rules! All my best. LUv, Andrea
Onclaud Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 12:54 PM
oop, it's you kasinath.. and for rick's contes! lol, got cross-eyed! :) huggs, nette
Onclaud Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 12:28 PM
misty is the word, rick... tenderly poignant!! wow...:) huggs, nette
Wilson Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 11:20 AM
just beautiful Kashinath! loved it..love,Deb
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