Love Thing

She will not say she was Predator.
She knows she was
(She has that throbbing memory to
remind her)
But it's in her intuition,
Her breath (her life)
To be Victim.
Let her play the part.

"It was like a game of chess
Against myself and I;
I won
And thus I lost-

We met by fate
Intertwined by what we loved
The ice gradually cracked and broke
And I wanted his flesh on mine,
His breath on mine
But he wanted me wholeheartedly.
ME!

But I was too torn
I am torn to pieces.

Yet I consented knowing...
Knowing...
I will break everything
So long as I'm broken
And without action,
Without thought,
He was made broken
And now he breaks everything.
A pestilent sick that penetrates.
How was I supposed to know he would grow ill?"

Now nod.
Smile until your jaw cracks,
Else she'll bicker
Til you do.
Don't show signs that you tracked her lie
But show pity...
She doesn't deserve pity
But smile with pity
Pity that the b**** lied to you.

That she deserves.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/17/2012 2:10:00 PM
JEWEL'S, congratulations with your awesome featured poem of the week... enjoy your day :-) PD
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Jewel Seuss
Date: 9/19/2012 2:42:00 PM
Shucks, thank you very much :) I hope you have a fantastic day yourself.
Date: 9/13/2012 10:09:00 PM
Hey Jew (You stole my pet name), nice to see you on the Soup, spilling your guts out on a topic that is obviously chipping away at you. I welcome you to the Soup and will be checking out your other pieces. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 9/19/2012 2:43:00 PM
Thank you for the welcome and sorry for stealing the name, haha.
Date: 6/6/2012 5:50:00 AM
This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.
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Date: 6/7/2012 7:49:00 PM
Wow...thank you Funom, I greatly appreciate your comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it for now I'm motivated to post some more. And I'm well on my way to view your work as well. Once again, thank you.
Date: 5/30/2012 5:09:00 PM
whoa what a totally powerful piece you have penned!
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Date: 6/7/2012 7:50:00 PM
Thank you very much Lisa. :) I really appreciate this feedback. I'd love to see your pieces as well.
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