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Love They Made Once they met he can't forget their passion burned so brightly. As he recalls the love they made when they made love almost nightly. Fear began to make it's way it seems he lost control. Then one night he shared with her what's on his heart and soul. The love with which you loved me that you loved me with before. Seems to be that I can't see, don't you love me anymore? She said her love for him has changed that it's grown even deeper. But a woman needs more than that from the man that hopes to keep her. A flower sometimes or a note and love not made in bed. Sometimes when you're a woman you need held instead. Now he holds her all the time not like right from the start. Insecurity has fled and he holds her with his heart. Edwin C Hofert

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Date: 5/30/2015 2:45:00 PM
wise words indeed Edwin:-) Hugs Jan xx 7
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/31/2015 7:47:00 AM
Oh Edwin have a wonderful relaxing break - you deserve it ... do take your trust notebook I am sure you will be inspired. I am on a 2 week holiday - it is TT where abut 40,000 bikers will descend on our little Island - am listening to the pre TT classic race on the radio at the moment
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/31/2015 7:44:00 AM
thank you Jan!!! God bless! Going on a mini vacation to the mountains. See you man eve!!!!! Hugs and love. Ed

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