Home » Poems » Brenda Chiri » Love the Soul

Love the Soul

Come sit lets talk awhile Show where your mind is at Nothing else, not my style Wish for us two to just chat Love for unrefined conversation No smoothness in your voice Real talk not an explanation Unprepared talk is my choice Impressed by whats inside of you Carefree without all the walls Unguarded someone who's true Someone whom my soul can call Nakedness of vulnerability unsure Pure untouched soul deep inside That's what holds all the allure Love the soul which you hide 3rd place Sponsor Brian Strand 1 poem on any theme Any form is acceptable. No name or identifying mark on your entry

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Nick Trim

Date: 6/10/2019 2:09:00 PM

ahhh thank you Brenda, I didn't you felt so strong when were conversing are wordings, unplan with humour or humor, a soulful human you be, write another poem me, love you tooo xx great poem btw

Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/10/2019 2:14:00 PM

Lmao! Nick you are such a muppet lol! So goofy yea I guess when one talks to you they do get unrefined lmao! So silly you are my dear!;)

Gary Smith

Date: 6/8/2019 4:59:00 AM

Excellent poetry Brenda, congrats. :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/8/2019 10:39:00 AM

Thank you Gary and congrats to you too!;)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/7/2019 6:51:00 PM

I do believe that is even why opposites attract when they meet they feel that soul connection. This is beautiful Brenda! Congratulations on your deserving win. xxoo

Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/7/2019 9:22:00 PM

Thank you so much Connie I so appreciate your words and congrats to you too!;)

John Fleming

Date: 5/28/2019 10:43:00 PM

Marvelous little poem this one, Brenda...I agree with CayCay -- quite extraordinary!! Superbly penned. Yours affectionately...as always. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/28/2019 11:34:00 PM

Ah john thank you so much! And I'm feeling quite privileged to have you comment on so many of my poems! All my affection john!;)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 5/28/2019 3:56:00 PM

You have absolutely exceeded ... well, exceeded something with this one; it is extraordinary. The emotion spills so darned poetically, Brenda. An exceptional pen from you! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/28/2019 11:36:00 PM

No CayCay I did not take your comment on any way but positive! Really I myself say i needed to revamp my work! I took no offense to you comment truly!

Caycay Jennings
Date: 5/28/2019 4:21:00 PM

Brenda - I was NOT inferring that, please hear me!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/28/2019 4:10:00 PM

Thank you CayCay I so appreciate your warm and supportive comment! I guess my poetry needed revamp so to speak. A fresh start anyway! ;)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/28/2019 2:13:00 PM

I like nothing better than people who avoid artificial talk and who can just be themselves. Pretend characters covered in 'makeup' usually have nothing much to show on the inside! Love your poem, Brenda:) Hugs // paul

Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/28/2019 4:09:00 PM

So true Paul!;) I hate pretenders so much! Or wanna be's! I like as the poem says I love the vulnerable person the one that hides! Thank you so much Paul!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 5/28/2019 8:14:00 AM

Fantastic write Brenda

Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/28/2019 11:37:00 AM

Allen thank you so much!

Laura Leiser

Date: 5/27/2019 10:57:00 PM

Yes, true talk that’s unpretentious is the best. Well written with great insight, Brenda! Enjoyed :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/28/2019 7:21:00 AM

Thank you Laura I so appreciate your comment and your read!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/27/2019 9:38:00 PM

The ones who hide their souls the deepest are sometimes the ones who have already had bits of it eaten away by society's meanness. I love it that your poem shows the wisdom in "talking awhile".

Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/28/2019 7:20:00 AM

Ah my county friend and I love it when you comment! Thank you so very much!

John Hamilton

Date: 5/27/2019 9:05:00 PM

Wonderful rhymes and message, bravo Brenda...enjoyed!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 5/28/2019 7:19:00 AM

Thank you John! Thank is so kind of you! I do appreciate your comment!