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Love the Soul

Come sit lets talk awhile
Show where your mind is at
Nothing else, not my style
Wish for us two to just chat

Love for unrefined conversation
No smoothness in your voice
Real talk not an explanation
Unprepared talk is my choice

Impressed by whats inside of you
Carefree without all the walls
Unguarded someone who's true
Someone whom my soul can call

Nakedness of vulnerability unsure
Pure untouched soul deep inside
That's what holds all the allure
Love the soul which you hide



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Nick Trim Date: 6/10/2019 2:09:00 PM ahhh thank you Brenda, I didn't you felt so strong when were conversing are wordings, unplan with humour or humor, a soulful human you be, write another poem me, love you tooo xx great poem btw Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 6/10/2019 2:14:00 PM Lmao! Nick you are such a muppet lol! So goofy yea I guess when one talks to you they do get unrefined lmao! So silly you are my dear!;)

Gary Smith Date: 6/8/2019 4:59:00 AM Excellent poetry Brenda, congrats. :) Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 6/8/2019 10:39:00 AM Thank you Gary and congrats to you too!;)

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/7/2019 6:51:00 PM I do believe that is even why opposites attract when they meet they feel that soul connection. This is beautiful Brenda! Congratulations on your deserving win. xxoo Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 6/7/2019 9:22:00 PM Thank you so much Connie I so appreciate your words and congrats to you too!;)

John Fleming Date: 5/28/2019 10:43:00 PM Marvelous little poem this one, Brenda...I agree with CayCay -- quite extraordinary!! Superbly penned. Yours affectionately...as always. :) john Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 5/28/2019 11:34:00 PM Ah john thank you so much! And I'm feeling quite privileged to have you comment on so many of my poems! All my affection john!;)

CayCay Jennings Date: 5/28/2019 3:56:00 PM You have absolutely exceeded ... well, exceeded something with this one; it is extraordinary. The emotion spills so darned poetically, Brenda. An exceptional pen from you! Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 5/28/2019 11:36:00 PM No CayCay I did not take your comment on any way but positive! Really I myself say i needed to revamp my work! I took no offense to you comment truly! CayCay Jennings Date: 5/28/2019 4:21:00 PM Brenda - I was NOT inferring that, please hear me! Brenda Chiri Date: 5/28/2019 4:10:00 PM Thank you CayCay I so appreciate your warm and supportive comment! I guess my poetry needed revamp so to speak. A fresh start anyway! ;)

Paul Callus Date: 5/28/2019 2:13:00 PM I like nothing better than people who avoid artificial talk and who can just be themselves. Pretend characters covered in 'makeup' usually have nothing much to show on the inside! Love your poem, Brenda:) Hugs // paul Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 5/28/2019 4:09:00 PM So true Paul!;) I hate pretenders so much! Or wanna be's! I like as the poem says I love the vulnerable person the one that hides! Thank you so much Paul!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. Date: 5/28/2019 8:14:00 AM Fantastic write Brenda Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 5/28/2019 11:37:00 AM Allen thank you so much!

Laura Leiser Date: 5/27/2019 10:57:00 PM Yes, true talk that’s unpretentious is the best. Well written with great insight, Brenda! Enjoyed :) Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 5/28/2019 7:21:00 AM Thank you Laura I so appreciate your comment and your read!

Caren Krutsinger Date: 5/27/2019 9:38:00 PM The ones who hide their souls the deepest are sometimes the ones who have already had bits of it eaten away by society's meanness. I love it that your poem shows the wisdom in "talking awhile". Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 5/28/2019 7:20:00 AM Ah my county friend and I love it when you comment! Thank you so very much!

John Hamilton Date: 5/27/2019 9:05:00 PM Wonderful rhymes and message, bravo Brenda...enjoyed! Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 5/28/2019 7:19:00 AM Thank you John! Thank is so kind of you! I do appreciate your comment!