Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Free verse

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Love the Lord - the Hotan Style

~Love The Lord~
(Hotan)


Love Lord with all heart
His presence feel day and night
Hear His message heed His call
He loves us
He's not far away
When we fall
He's right beside us
When troubled He hears our prayers
He lifts our spirits each day and night.


Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2013


March.18.2016


~Author's  Notes:

The   " Hotan "  is   a   Japanese syllabic poem of nine unrhyming lines, the Hotan gets its name from it's syllabe pattern, being a combination of a Haiku (hokku = ho) and a Tanka (tan).

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Nette Onclaud March 18, 2016 at 10:32 AM you move me with such tender impressions, dorian.. so fitting for this lenten season; so redeeming!..huggs Dorian Petersen Potter October 14, 2016 at 11:58 AM Thank you ever so kindly,Nette, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:) I apologize for the very late reply but I've been extremely, very busy this year.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D