Love Taking Over Me

The beginning   is   good   as   ending   is   bad
                turning   sad   as   you   leave
           when   i   see   you   im   glad
          
            bleeding   inside   as   you   walk   away
                              i   tear   as   i   miss   your   touch
                  making   the   sky   turn   grey
          
          hating   my   life   outside   your   arms
                        sitting   on   a   bench   as   i   think   of   you
             being   torn   apart   by   black   swarms

              i   find   myself   falling   for   you
                 as   i   make   a   wish   on   a   shooting   star
                  you   make   the   sky   turn   blue

                 i   wait   till   i   see   you   again
                   never   guessing   my   love   for   you
                  you   are   more   then   just   a   friend
      
              you   make   me   feel   alive   in   heart
                            butterflies   in   stomach
                        feeling   love   in   the   center   part 
               
                                 i   feel   you   deep   inside
                         pain   as   your   hurt
                           but   full   of   life   when   im   by   your   side

                        my   heart   glows   as   we   are   together
     you   became   my   love   as   you   became   my   first   kiss
                           i   can   feel   inside   my   heart   that   you   are   my   forever
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 3/24/2010 11:01:00 AM
This is amazing. Sort of lyrical. Beautiful, keep the writing up. Always .:Rain:.
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Date: 3/23/2010 11:17:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Devon. I enjoyed reading this piece. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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