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Love Taking Over Me

The beginning is good as ending is bad turning sad as you leave when i see you im glad bleeding inside as you walk away i tear as i miss your touch making the sky turn grey hating my life outside your arms sitting on a bench as i think of you being torn apart by black swarms i find myself falling for you as i make a wish on a shooting star you make the sky turn blue i wait till i see you again never guessing my love for you you are more then just a friend you make me feel alive in heart butterflies in stomach feeling love in the center part i feel you deep inside pain as your hurt but full of life when im by your side my heart glows as we are together you became my love as you became my first kiss i can feel inside my heart that you are my forever

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Date: 3/24/2010 11:01:00 AM
This is amazing. Sort of lyrical. Beautiful, keep the writing up. Always .:Rain:.
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Date: 3/23/2010 11:17:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Devon. I enjoyed reading this piece. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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