Love Surrender

Love surrender I will surrender my love,
To whom the man I'll l love forever I've learned to fall in love, 
To whom he was too what he does to how he treated me he loved me whole not just cause,
His may of been in first site and mine may of grown not over night,
But both loved whole and loved right,
And now how can we have both lost site,
When both of our love for one another was wrapped so so tight,
And now I sit sadly lonlely lost of what I felt was my mr right,
But wondering how in the end did me so wrong did he get lost or scared of fright,
When we are scared we do things that are not right and make us deny to the ones we love we will lie, but know this I miss us and can forgive to let it not be just you and I but us I am here waiting wanting to know will you try, to come back as whole as one we protected one another, not to allow anyone to hurt  or become between eachother, I want again to be where I only remember see one lover, back in eachithers arms under our bedroom cover.                                                       

 I love you what your were . You were special . And still can be if you can find to ur way back. Tracy Larson.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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