Love Suppressed

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How Do I tell... you bravely... you're my everything? That I slipped on your soul and fell Into its abyss? That the sun rises and sets in... Your seductive eyes? How do I tell you that you're my moon, my star, my raison d'etre? Submitted for "If only you knew Poetry Contest" Sponsored by: Silent One (Winner: 3rd Place) Date submitted: 08/24/2019 What Was Left Unsaid Poetry Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier (Winner: 3rd Place) Date written and posted: 04/20/2019

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/31/2019 3:09:00 PM

- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/31/2019 5:11:00 PM

Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/30/2019 7:14:00 PM

this is simply beautiful...love the romantic feel penned in this one...congrats on your win :) hugs

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/30/2019 8:12:00 PM

Thank you very much, Sandy!:-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2019 6:06:00 PM

I enjoy shorter poems like this one. Loved this, Edward. Congrats in the contest

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/30/2019 8:11:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea:-) Glad you loved it!

Silent One

Date: 8/29/2019 4:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/29/2019 5:07:00 PM

Thank you for my placement, Silent One!:-) I'm so honored.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/25/2019 3:12:00 AM

Some people find it very difficult to lay bare their heart for many reasons. This is quite moving and beautiful Edward. Congratulations on your deserving high placement! xxoo

Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/25/2019 6:11:00 AM

Thank you very much, Connie:-)