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Love Sucks

Single sexy stuttering simple sue,
Loved lean laughing lisping Lou,
She spoke softly slow sentences,
Lou lisped loud without pretences!

Often were out on romantic dates,
By heart and mind such good mates,
Joked and laughed their whole time,
Spoke in stutters and lisped in rhyme!

Said she one day in romantic note,
How do you likke mmmy leather coat?
He laughed lisped “ you loos fo dood!
By that he meant ‘you look so good!’

Days passed,they were ready to wed,
She wanted him one day in her bed,
She made the bold move and asked
If hhhe wwwould stay for breakfast?

He feigned a surprise with a smile,
He pretended about it for a while,
Then with a lisp he said “Yef, I fould!”
With that he meant “Yes! I would!”

That night together in love cocoon,
He opened all his heart to her soon,
To ‘suck’ with her was always his dream,
So she promptly took him out for an ice cream!

For those in love who stutter or lisp,
Here is a message, short and crisp,
If you want to say something inviting,
Do communicate your love, in writing!

Written 09/august/2020
Sponsor Kai Michael Neumann
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Deepa Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 6:53 AM
Hahaha...Krish sir.. Such a humorous one.:-) your lines are hootiful..:-D(beautiful).. I know we should'nt make fun of people who have stuttering issues..But, I just enjoyed..:-) Last two lines finished off gracefully with your best advice;-) Take care.Warmest regards coming your way:-)
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 7:54 AM
Hi Deepa Pleased you like it. We are simply describing love between two who have difficulty in speaking where their love words could be misinterpreted! We wish them both happiness! Just for humour.
Somadas Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 4:15 AM
lol.. A hilarious write Krish.. And the alliteration of the first stanza is fo hood.. I mean 'so good'.. Enjoyed your rhyme..
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 4:44 AM
Thanks Jenish! Great to have your food heedback!!!!lol! Kind regards Krish
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