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Love Story

It was the 3rd of November When everything went down He caught my eye I caught his eye Transcending space and time We went up And we went down On a joy ride Thinking about each other Getting tingling feelings Deep inside I told my friends He told his friends They meet each other at the ball court And they make plans To hook us up Down the block At the corner store It was funny How it all went down It'll give you some to think about Specially when you so in love So their ain't no other Cinderella story that matches to mine No their ain't no other Gaze that transcends space and time See I've never felt this way inside Specially for a guy like mine I can tell this love story ain't gonna end Baby

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Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/2/2011 5:03:00 PM

* “Life Can Truly Mirror Fairy Tales Sometimes * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Keneathia * Yet Rare for The Many Is This Its Extreme Truths * When You Least Expect Something * Your Heart Explodes With Love * Owww, Like A Train Rushing Through Your Soul * Beautiful Once More My Dear * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *

Keneathia Brown
Date: 11/3/2011 5:55:00 PM

In the way you said this I can tell you are a true poet. I'm only 15 years of age and I love poetry and singing and also music more than anything. I wish I had the poetic personality you have. I look up to you. My Love Always, Keneathia:)