--Love Storm--

My hummingbird found me
A cactus i used to be
Instead she wrapped around me
she kissed my deep buried heart
Rose petals surround me
All around me 
All around me 
I am a dancing flower now
Dancing On the beats 
Of her cute fluttering sound...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Makama Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 8:20 AM
Sweet expressions from wonderful lines which are so liberal to disallow the message stay hidden. I love this poem and it is definitely a 7
Dedha Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 1:15 AM
Thank you mr.makama... Their are more to come... Hope you'll like.. Have a smiling day...
Mehta Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 7:50 AM
Lovely romantic write on love, Ankit
Dedha Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 6:28 PM
Thanks for appreciating, sir
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