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Love Stories

LOVE STORIES (6 Haikus) on one long low string plumbing the depth of despair violincello like sharp pixie nails teasing hurting sadistic mascara blue smoke she says “I love you” perfumed breath mascara eyes flask of red red wine both vulnerable blue cigarette smoke curling tears empty bottle gypsy violin blue cigarette smoke curling sans paroles sorrow and despair? no! a D arpeggio sun flowers health life!

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Jay Loveless

Date: 5/14/2010 11:26:00 AM

Hmmm, i enjoyed this very much. its pretty, and simple. nice work. Always .::Rain Bow::.

Skat A

Date: 5/2/2010 5:25:00 PM

I SAID amusing ANDREA, THEY ARE FAR BEYOND A IN A BETTER WAY WE DESCRIBE LOVE.=== GYPSY, pixie nails A VERY AMUSING SIGHT I CAN SEE . pinned it Daver, love it once again,,Irma

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/29/2010 4:42:00 PM

the up and down ride of love, attraction and the suspense! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2010 12:44:00 PM

Daver, I am wondering why Irma said amusing to them. They are simply romantic. Let me go to your poems from earlier pages now and check one out! (you better work on getting thru to these young'uns. hahaha) Luv, andrea

Skat A

Date: 4/28/2010 7:20:00 PM

ODD WAY OF SEEING LOVE REAL AMUSING .. LOVE DOES COME IN MANY STYLES,, LOVE YOUR HAIKU,,IRMA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2010 3:11:00 PM

These are GREAT, DAver. Are they new?? MY favorites were the first and the last. that first one actually I think is senryu (maybe most of them are) and it could well be in a magazine! My opinion for what it's worth! well, I be here long time, daver. me go eat lunch now. mucho hungry. LUv, andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/28/2010 3:08:00 PM

Great write, Daver, keep the hope alive as in the las two lines..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/28/2010 2:37:00 PM

real deep in the love Haiku, i have enjoyed all 10, just joking I have enjoyed all 6, thanks for sharing your insights on twisted love,..p.d.

Date: 4/28/2010 9:32:00 AM

So creative and dramatic--comes alive on the screen. What an interesting perspective. Keep up the good writing!! Karen