Jared Pickett Poet Free verse

"love Spell Perfume"

Deep infatuation resides in my mind.
Silent,
can't find the words.
She is run-way model fine.
Men stand,
organized in line.
Spitting their "game"
but,
I believe I am the guy..

She focuses on me,
I'm across the room.
Jack & Coke in hand.
I can smell her "Love Spell" perfume.
Much competition looms.
Consuelo, the queen bee,
the male spirit she'll consume.

I approach, 
her eyes never leave.
She has been taunting me.
Her eyes a deep green.
Coke bottle figure, voluptuous,
her blouse busting at the seams.
I am instantly in "lust"
Can she be what I need?


Jared Pickett
11/28/09
Asavvy1

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Richard Pickett December 9, 2009 at 9:34 AM You have a way with these steamy poems Son....Good Job....Dad

Sara Kendrick December 2, 2009 at 1:05 PM It is according to what you want out of a bride. Interestingly done write on the topic of meeting the right person at a bar. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

Izzy Gumbo November 29, 2009 at 7:50 PM Wow! another steamy write. :) Thanks for all the kind comments Jared and for the faves! You are also on my faves poets and poems, I enjoy reading you very much :)

Marty Owens November 28, 2009 at 6:30 PM Maybe she is if the "lusting can be lasting"....Loved your poem...Marty

Doris Culverhouse November 28, 2009 at 12:02 PM no, never, you need a fat girl who can cook and make you laugh-LOL HA Just kidding-you have to figure that out! Jared Pickett March 19, 2014 at 10:11 PM That's awesome!! Can't argue with that, although I would work out harder to keep all that good cookin' maintained. I can't believe I never responded to this.;-)Asavvy1

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 28, 2009 at 10:38 AM Well only u can decide if u want "momentary" or "lasting" ... but I luv this emotional flow of yours today.. thought u disappeared on me... am now driving home from my brother's while on laptop ... good to hear u made it through turkey day... and thankxxx for your comments on my "is it good for u?" now being a flirty girl I bet u thought the content of my poem was going to be different than what it actually was, yes? no?.. OH!! .. talk soon.. planning to be home by 8 p.m... luv.. "Sweetie"

Charmaine Chircop November 28, 2009 at 8:09 AM This Queen Bee Of yours is feeding you a lot iof Honey,as it seems Jared: ) "I can smell her "Love Spell" perfume,it seems other are smelling it too...So go for you Consuelo,and shoo the others away..lol-Charma