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"love Spell Perfume"

Deep infatuation resides in my mind. Silent, can't find the words. She is run-way model fine. Men stand, organized in line. Spitting their "game" but, I believe I am the guy.. She focuses on me, I'm across the room. Jack & Coke in hand. I can smell her "Love Spell" perfume. Much competition looms. Consuelo, the queen bee, the male spirit she'll consume. I approach, her eyes never leave. She has been taunting me. Her eyes a deep green. Coke bottle figure, voluptuous, her blouse busting at the seams. I am instantly in "lust" Can she be what I need? Jared Pickett 11/28/09 Asavvy1

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Richard Pickett

Date: 12/9/2009 9:34:00 AM

You have a way with these steamy poems Son....Good Job....Dad

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/2/2009 1:05:00 PM

It is according to what you want out of a bride. Interestingly done write on the topic of meeting the right person at a bar. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 11/29/2009 7:50:00 PM

Wow! another steamy write. :) Thanks for all the kind comments Jared and for the faves! You are also on my faves poets and poems, I enjoy reading you very much :)

Marty Owens

Date: 11/28/2009 6:30:00 PM

Maybe she is if the "lusting can be lasting"....Loved your poem...Marty

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/28/2009 12:02:00 PM

no, never, you need a fat girl who can cook and make you laugh-LOL HA Just kidding-you have to figure that out!

Jared Pickett
Date: 3/19/2014 10:11:00 PM

That's awesome!! Can't argue with that, although I would work out harder to keep all that good cookin' maintained. I can't believe I never responded to this.;-)Asavvy1

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/28/2009 10:38:00 AM

Well only u can decide if u want "momentary" or "lasting" ... but I luv this emotional flow of yours today.. thought u disappeared on me... am now driving home from my brother's while on laptop ... good to hear u made it through turkey day... and thankxxx for your comments on my "is it good for u?" now being a flirty girl I bet u thought the content of my poem was going to be different than what it actually was, yes? no?.. OH!! .. talk soon.. planning to be home by 8 p.m... luv.. "Sweetie"

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/28/2009 8:09:00 AM

This Queen Bee Of yours is feeding you a lot iof Honey,as it seems Jared: ) "I can smell her "Love Spell" perfume,it seems other are smelling it too...So go for you Consuelo,and shoo the others away..lol-Charma