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Love Spell

A love so zealous Can defy a thousand men But to whom shall I give my love If no one wants, what I have to offer him I lay awake at night And cry a million tears My pillow cries back at me Because it hears my fears At daybreak, I lay awake Heartbroken, yet I persevere For I will never give up on finding him Not for a hundred years Today, I passed a man, who gave me a wink I think …

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Date: 8/2/2010 10:00:00 AM
i love this one, keep it up!------Ell
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Date: 8/2/2010 9:43:00 AM
I love that third stanza about the pillow crying back,, deep write,, enjoyed your write...P.D.
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