Love Songs To My Future Wife - 3

slow hands
make mountains
moved at the mercy of your gaze
devotion melted
into a word of praise
your smile
empties me of myself
i am yours
my desire is to be so
and remain
until your light
may release me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 23, 2016 at 4:33 AM
Awesome and romantic. Great second read. Linda
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March 22, 2016 at 10:16 PM
very Serene write Ian
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March 22, 2016 at 10:42 PM
cheers! thanks for reading!
Smith Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 9:15 PM
Lovely write. Good work
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March 22, 2016 at 10:43 PM
thank you, again!
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