Love Song

I'm going to write me a love song,
and each word will rhyme with you,
it's going to be about me all along,
yet it will have everything to do with you.
and as I sing out loud the pretty words,
you'll know how much it revels,
as it will be super sugar coated,
thick with sweetness you can't refuse,
it'll prick your ears and teased you'll be,
oh this love song i shall write for me!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Darjee Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 8:29 PM
Wonderfully expressed adorned with magnificent and emotive phrases.
Wigley Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 12:10 AM
This is a lovely submission, Dechen. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you enjoy sharing and reading with us. Have fun. Viv x
Pelki Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 12:10 PM
Thank you :)
A  Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 10:38 PM
this is a sweet poem. SKAT
Pelki Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 12:10 PM
Thank you SKAT! :)
A   Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 6:58 PM
Hi Dechen, this is a nice verse. I can't wait for you to write this love song and post it on this site. I too shall write a love song for my sweet love Nate who lives in Oregon. I'm glad you finally found the community you've been looking for.
Pelki Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 12:10 PM
Thank you :))
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