Love Song

Soft ripples, carried on
Gentle piano caresses-

Tilt my mind towards
Happy times, filled with
Feather touches in my memory

Like a pleasing smile,
Received from a loved one-
Warming every recess of my soul



02/25/12
6:20am
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Cheesman Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 4:00 AM
"gentle piana caresses" "feather touches in my memory" "warming every recess of my soul" 3 wonderful lines - they say it all - Shaz
Caulfield Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 9:34 AM
GENTLE PIANO CARRESSES. I LOVE IT.
Peranteau Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 7:32 AM
What a beautiful write dear poet ! I can just vision you at the piano, gently touching the keys, and whispering the lyrics James ! Awesome...to mine favz if'n ya don't mind sir !....much love, james
Wesley Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 7:16 PM
Wraps me in fuzzies James, I need that warmth you speak of and find it right here in your poem. So nice!
Chircop Avatar
April 4, 2012 at 8:02 AM
So very beautiful the memory of love and tender sweetness..lovely
A   Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 9:52 AM
Good morning, James, very beautifull "HAPPY ST PATRICK DAY TO YOU , GOD BLESS~ ALWAYS PD ;-)
Scripca Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 3:52 PM
I love the "feather touches in my memory..." A beautifully soft and gentle poem. James! Thank you for your comment on my " March of the Barefooted". Best, iolanda
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 6:06 AM
Lovely and soft poem, well done James. - oxox love from Anne-Lise
Eastman Avatar
February 28, 2012 at 1:16 PM
Touching and sensitive... Great write.
Chircop Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 10:32 AM
So soft and beautiful theses words..
Cooper Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 8:44 PM
sweet memories we find, in the recesses of our mind. lovely pen jim.
Fitzgerald Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 5:34 AM
Really enjoyed my read here James thank you , Declan ...
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