Love Song

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Poetry/Cinquain/Love Song
Copyright Protected, ID 05-1547-601-15
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written May 16, 2023
For the Standard contest, Song of My Heart
sponsor, JCB Brul, Judged 06/13/2023

Second Place

the love comes in a dream and you twirl me around spinning, spinning, spinning we dance the song

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/14/2023 9:57:00 AM

What a wonderful picture, Constance - dancing to the music of love - a dizzying experience indeed! Congratulations on your win! Blessings on your dance!

Constance La France
Date: 6/14/2023 3:50:00 PM

Sam, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/13/2023 2:10:00 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely poem in the contest "Song of my heart", Constance :) - hugs

Constance La France
Date: 6/13/2023 6:38:00 AM

Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment and hugs !

Paige Hind

Date: 5/18/2023 8:28:00 AM

Lovely poem, shaped like a heart! Loved it!

Constance La France
Date: 5/18/2023 9:27:00 AM

Paige, thank you so much for the comment and compliment !

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/15/2023 3:11:00 PM

Hello Constance, oh I hope you don't get dizzy. Friendship & Love /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/16/2023 5:23:00 AM

Hello Constance, Good morning. I just woke up. You are welcome. Enjoy your day. Love & Friendship ,\ Darlene/

Constance La France
Date: 5/15/2023 7:15:00 PM

Darlene, thank you so much for your comment, love !

Jan Allison

Date: 5/15/2023 1:44:00 PM

so few words say so much, this is delightful Constance:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 5/15/2023 7:16:00 PM

Jan, thank you so much for the compliment, hugs !