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Poetry/Cinquain/Love Song
Copyright Protected, ID 05-1547-601-15
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written May 16, 2023
For the Standard contest, Song of My Heart
sponsor, JCB Brul, Judged 06/13/2023

Second Place

Love Song

 
the love comes in a dream and you twirl me around spinning, spinning, spinning we dance the song
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kauffman Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 9:57 AM
What a wonderful picture, Constance - dancing to the music of love - a dizzying experience indeed! Congratulations on your win! Blessings on your dance!
La France Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 3:50 PM
Sam, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations !
Andresen Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 2:10 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely poem in the contest "Song of my heart", Constance :) - hugs
La France Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 6:38 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment and hugs !
Hind Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 8:28 AM
Lovely poem, shaped like a heart! Loved it!
La France Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 9:27 AM
Paige, thank you so much for the comment and compliment !
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 3:11 PM
Hello Constance, oh I hope you don't get dizzy. Friendship & Love /Darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 16, 2023 at 5:23 AM
Hello Constance, Good morning. I just woke up. You are welcome. Enjoy your day. Love & Friendship ,\ Darlene/
La France Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 7:15 PM
Darlene, thank you so much for your comment, love !
Allison Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 1:44 PM
so few words say so much, this is delightful Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 7:16 PM
Jan, thank you so much for the compliment, hugs !
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