Love Song

It was a love song
making me feel something
something inside
making me want someone
to hold them close
wanting someone to make mine
never wanting to be alone
It was a love song
that had me lying in an empty room
crying
wishing someone was here
to fill this empty space
It was a love song
that reminded of me these things
not wanting to sleep alone
it was the radio that brought these feelings to life
it was a love song
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Adeite Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 8:49 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great DONNY! Adeleke
Fraser Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 5:04 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
Brown Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 9:14 AM
love this poem ! Every time I hear a love song, I get that same feeling : ) Beautifully done. It makes me want to read more of your work. Congratulations on being featured.
Rider Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 1:00 PM
Congratualtions on being featured this week! Wonderful poem! ~Trudy~
Brown Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 3:44 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Donny. Love, Carol
Christian Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 2:12 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
Burton Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 3:28 PM
yeah... nice song, love the title as well. enjoy your day.
Devonshire Avatar
March 28, 2009 at 7:08 PM
Beautiful lyrics, Donny!!!
Sheart Avatar
March 28, 2009 at 5:26 PM
Hi Donny I'm loving the feeling you have captured here! This is why I personally write lyrics to make a difference in peoples lives. This poem proves to me that it is possible to do that. To give people hope, vision an embrace. You made my day with this one! Take care hun.Many blessings to you and yours. Love Light Truth Patricia
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