Love So Strong

thou art my sweet love,
romeo and Juliet,
can't even top this,
cupids strongest bow,
will brake under our love,
yet it doesn't last.




(inspired by Shakespeare)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 5:45 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Bree. Love Carol
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February 21, 2011 at 1:42 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Bree. Love, Carol
Chircop Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 8:16 AM
shakeshere inspired you very well as much as my shakespeare inspires me--Charma
Humphreys Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 6:40 AM
nice but are syllables right?
Kendrick Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 3:31 PM
Nicely done poem on lost love. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Saucillo Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 2:26 PM
really enjoyed this! always a pleasure to read your work. keep putting the pen to the paper!
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