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love so strong

thou art my sweet love,
romeo and Juliet,
can't even top this,
cupids strongest bow,
will brake under our love,
yet it doesn't last.




(inspired by Shakespeare)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/9/2011 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Bree. Love Carol
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Date: 2/21/2011 1:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Bree. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/2/2009 8:16:00 AM
shakeshere inspired you very well as much as my shakespeare inspires me--Charma
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Date: 12/2/2009 6:40:00 AM
nice but are syllables right?
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Date: 12/1/2009 3:31:00 PM
Nicely done poem on lost love. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/1/2009 2:26:00 PM
really enjoyed this! always a pleasure to read your work. keep putting the pen to the paper!
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