Love Sick

Love Sick
 And the way she says "I want you babe"
 And I know that it's true
 And every time she says my name
 These feelings so brand new
 And when she holds my hand today
 She holds my hand She holds my hand

So I smoked that cigarette to the end
 Just waiting for the phone to ring
 And I'm writing this lonesome song
that I hope to never sing
 To never sing To never sing

I'm Love Sick
 She's the drug that's deep inside of me
 A needle and my eyes both bleed
 Love Sick
 I'm guessing she just walked away
 These Hopes and Dreams are lost today
 I'm Love Sick
 And this pain it hurts so bad
 Hurts so bad Hurts so bad

It's the way she said "I want you babe"
 And the way she holds my hand today
 She holds my hand She holds my hand

So I watched that cigarette 
 Just fade away Just fade away
 I hate today I hate today
 She said she'd be my Valentine

2nd place  Valentine Contest by Richard Lamoureux
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lamoureux Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 6:04 AM
Thanks for entering my contest and congrats on your placement.
Alexander Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 8:46 AM
It is an honor. Thank you very much.
Y. Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 8:27 PM
Hi Christian, Congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
Alexander Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 8:18 PM
Thank you so much AleXis
A   Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 1:25 PM
Christian Alexander, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
Alexander Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 3:12 PM
Thank you doll. Xoxo
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