Line Gauthier Poet Rhyme

Love Should Be So Simple

She once loved a mathematician
But felt just like an acquisition
Always said trust her intuition
So when she had grief with her transmission
Without an ounce of remission
She dropped the mathematician
And quickly married the technician
Car engine sounded no longer like a ton of rubble
Always said trust her intuition
Now she never ever has any auto trouble
The moral… happiness where it stands
Is finding a guy skilled with his hands



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on November 2, 2017 for contest RHYME II sponsored by LAURA LOO  -  RANKED 1ST

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Sandra Haight November 26, 2017 at 7:48 AM An outstanding, fun poem, Line! Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Sandra Line Gauthier November 26, 2017 at 12:06 PM Thank you, Sandra. Much appreciated.

Beautiful Scars November 25, 2017 at 8:20 AM great poem sweet Line, loved it, thank you and congrats on top placement :) Line Gauthier November 25, 2017 at 12:37 PM Thanks Laura, your contests are always challenging in the most interesting ways.

Kim Rodrigues November 24, 2017 at 9:16 PM Lots of fun! Congratulations, Line! Line Gauthier November 25, 2017 at 12:38 PM Thanks for your visit and comment, Kim. Always appreciated.

Eve Roper November 24, 2017 at 8:24 PM Line, congratulations on your win with this beautifully written poem. Excellent! Line Gauthier November 25, 2017 at 7:55 AM Thanks for your visit and comment, Eve.

Subimal Sinha-Roy November 22, 2017 at 11:59 PM Congratulations, Line on your win with a funny yet so very practical poem. Line Gauthier November 23, 2017 at 11:48 AM Thank you, Subimal. Very appreciated.

Rob Carmack November 22, 2017 at 8:08 PM LOL Line, congrats on your win. Line Gauthier November 22, 2017 at 8:45 PM Thanks, Rob. Much appreciated.

Jan Allison November 22, 2017 at 5:25 PM Great humour here Line:-) Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Line Gauthier November 22, 2017 at 8:29 PM Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.

Gregory Richard Barden November 22, 2017 at 4:23 PM lol - this was charming, Line, and I got a smile out of it, (much needed) ... congrats on your win, my friend! Blessings! :-) Line Gauthier November 22, 2017 at 8:28 PM Thanks, Gregory... and I wish you so many more smiles...

John Gondolf November 22, 2017 at 9:35 AM Line, I enjoyed reading this one, congrats on your win! John Line Gauthier November 22, 2017 at 8:27 PM Thanks, John. Much appreciated.

Heidi Sands November 2, 2017 at 4:11 PM This one gives me a laugh Line. Well done. Good luck in the contest :) Line Gauthier November 2, 2017 at 5:16 PM Thanks Heidi. Glad you liked it.

Vijay Pandit November 2, 2017 at 3:24 PM A fun read--love the last line--best for a win, Line! Line Gauthier November 2, 2017 at 5:16 PM Thanks Vijay. Love your vote of confidence.