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Love Should Be So Simple

She once loved a mathematician But felt just like an acquisition Always said trust her intuition So when she had grief with her transmission Without an ounce of remission She dropped the mathematician And quickly married the technician Car engine sounded no longer like a ton of rubble Always said trust her intuition Now she never ever has any auto trouble The moral… happiness where it stands Is finding a guy skilled with his hands AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on November 2, 2017 for contest RHYME II sponsored by LAURA LOO - RANKED 1ST

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Date: 11/26/2017 7:48:00 AM
An outstanding, fun poem, Line! Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Sandra
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Date: 11/26/2017 12:06:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/25/2017 8:20:00 AM
great poem sweet Line, loved it, thank you and congrats on top placement :)
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Date: 11/25/2017 12:37:00 PM
Thanks Laura, your contests are always challenging in the most interesting ways.
Date: 11/24/2017 9:16:00 PM
Lots of fun! Congratulations, Line!
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Date: 11/25/2017 12:38:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Kim. Always appreciated.
Date: 11/24/2017 8:24:00 PM
Line, congratulations on your win with this beautifully written poem. Excellent!
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Date: 11/25/2017 7:55:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Eve.
Date: 11/22/2017 11:59:00 PM
Congratulations, Line on your win with a funny yet so very practical poem.
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Date: 11/23/2017 11:48:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal. Very appreciated.
Date: 11/22/2017 8:08:00 PM
LOL Line, congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/22/2017 8:45:00 PM
Thanks, Rob. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/22/2017 5:25:00 PM
Great humour here Line:-) Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/22/2017 8:29:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/22/2017 4:23:00 PM
lol - this was charming, Line, and I got a smile out of it, (much needed) ... congrats on your win, my friend! Blessings! :-)
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Date: 11/22/2017 8:28:00 PM
Thanks, Gregory... and I wish you so many more smiles...
Date: 11/22/2017 9:35:00 AM
Line, I enjoyed reading this one, congrats on your win! John
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Date: 11/22/2017 8:27:00 PM
Thanks, John. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/2/2017 4:11:00 PM
This one gives me a laugh Line. Well done. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 11/2/2017 5:16:00 PM
Thanks Heidi. Glad you liked it.
Date: 11/2/2017 3:24:00 PM
A fun read--love the last line--best for a win, Line!
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Date: 11/2/2017 5:16:00 PM
Thanks Vijay. Love your vote of confidence.

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