Love Shines In the Dark

A sugary block of Bliss
Melts in my mouth.
No regrets.
I'm on top of the world
     and beneath reality
Impossible things!
The mind plays tricks
You can hear the lights
I see sounds.
As my reality melts around me,
and darkness descends-a thought,
     is this drug too much?
And then:
     the impossible happens.
She looks at me-into me,
And i know for certain,-
    as my worries wane,
Everything will be alright
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Brown Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 11:17 AM
When I welcomed you to PoetrySoup I hoped that you would continue your writing and share it with us. Today I am asking you to please continue your poetry writing. Just write what is in your heart as that is where the best poetry comes from. I will stop back soon and hope to be able to read some new poetry from you at that time Max. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 7:22 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Max. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 1:25 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site as I have enjoyed your emotional write tonight.. sharing words with luv..
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace