Love Sentence

I looked as love and its deeds were 
launched in every sentence to life 
When my heart was in so many 
locations
It became real
Finding myself pleading guilty to 
love's sentence
An arrest to which matters was of 
cardiac  to be serving time in it
My sentence a heart worth much as a 
country 
A patriot i became to serve  in time  
till death was due and to do us part
I became focused on one location like 
a teloscope facing a star in a home 
to  so many in the sky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Makama Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 9:16 AM
Reading through your words gives a majestic result of creating expectations and at the same time meeting them. This is awesome considering the feat achieved in a few lines. Great write friend and please keep on letting your heart speak for us to learn and enjoy. A def 7
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June 5, 2014 at 11:40 PM
Nice Obedience. Verlena
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