Robert Pettit Poet Senryu

Love Senryu Collaboration With Leolee

Love your tender touch
Lay your body next to mine
Let our love evolve

Stay with me tonight
I can’t get enough of you
Stay here forever

Magic is the night
The sweetness of your kisses
Awakens desires

Let’s get intertwined
We can’t be separated
Together always.

A wonderful love
That we have for each other
I hope it will last
 
Tonight together
Too few hours in the night.
Let’s spend it wisely

Several hours
Before the sun comes up again
We’ll do it right now.
 
Moments of pure bliss
We are sharing this moment
Please time, move slowly


First four written by Leolee  Last four written by myself

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Kim Merryman January 29, 2012 at 3:14 PM Very nice string of senryus, Robert. Good collaboration. Congrats on your win. Love, Kim

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 28, 2012 at 9:10 AM wow Robert ..congrats on a great win and collab... awesome words about love..my fav subject.. spectacular one..

Andrea Dietrich January 27, 2012 at 8:00 PM Wonderful poem you did with Leolee. Congrats, and tell her a big congrats from me!!! Luv, Andrea

David Williams January 27, 2012 at 8:37 AM Robert and Leolee congrats on your win..David

Carol Sunshine Brown January 27, 2012 at 7:07 AM Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Double Contest" Robert. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 27, 2012 at 6:15 AM Love your romantic collaboration!! Congrats to you both!!

Poet Destroyer A January 27, 2012 at 12:59 AM ROBERT, CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful win in my contest* hugs ;-)~p.d

Andrea Dietrich January 16, 2012 at 5:50 PM I asked who Leolee is because PD has a collaboration contest with folks outside of Soup being our co-writers! Robert Pettit January 16, 2012 at 10:12 PM I submitted this in PD's contest.

Andrea Dietrich January 16, 2012 at 5:49 PM Ahhhh yes, and this reminds me of a sonnet I once wrote about cruel time moving too quickly on a light like this one. Who is Leolee? Robert Pettit January 16, 2012 at 10:14 PM The poem I wrote for Leolee is "A New Baby in Australia". Check it out at your convenience. Robert Pettit January 16, 2012 at 10:11 PM Leolee is somebody I met on a now-defunct poetry site. She is registered with poetrysoup, but has no submitted works. She registered to see the poem I wrote about her granddaughter.

Jack Horne January 16, 2012 at 2:27 PM Lovely co write : )

Poet Destroyer A January 15, 2012 at 11:17 PM ROBERT... MAY I ASK IF THIS IS FOR MY CONTEST.... I SURE HOPE SO.... AND IF IT'S NOT..PLEASE ENTER IT...LOL... AND IS THIS LEOLEE... FROM THE SOUP.... A VERY SMOOTH POEM..LOVE IT..P.D.