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Love Rule

This is your rule forever This is my agreement forever You keep your distance I keep my promise How much i wish you could break your line How much i wish I could across your mind Your red rays make me weak My sorrow flow through your sick You save your smile for your love I lock my heart for my life This is you forever This is me forever

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/15/2016 12:08:00 PM
Bar, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 11/15/2015 10:36:00 PM
Bar, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 9/24/2014 2:34:00 PM
Very intricate, deep powerful piece! Excellent write! Pandita
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Date: 7/26/2014 4:54:00 PM
WAOW WAO.... you keep your distance i keep my promise ..beautiful !
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Date: 5/15/2014 10:41:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :) It touched my heart
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