Bar Zhao Poet Concrete

Love Rule

This is your rule forever 
This is my agreement forever 
You keep your distance 
I keep my promise 

How much i wish you could break your line 
How much i wish I could across your mind 
Your red rays make me weak 
My sorrow flow through your sick 

You save your smile for your love 
I lock my heart for my life 
This is you forever 
This is me forever

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Beata Agustin June 21, 2024 at 11:52 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A February 15, 2016 at 12:08 PM Bar, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A November 15, 2015 at 10:36 PM Bar, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**

Pandita Sietesantos September 24, 2014 at 2:34 PM Very intricate, deep powerful piece! Excellent write! Pandita

Hina Nasir July 26, 2014 at 4:54 PM WAOW WAO.... you keep your distance i keep my promise ..beautiful !

James Hyler May 15, 2014 at 10:41 AM Thank you for sharing :) It touched my heart