Love Rests

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*2nd Terzanelle. Still practicing.

Love rests in places that are safe to be Where there is truth and trust that is real No shaking earthquakes or storms to see Love rests with words, you can confide and feel No thunder clap surprises, consistent at best Where there is truth and trust that is real Love rests with the sunset each day in the West With giving and sacrifice, open as the sea No thunder clap surprises, consistent at best Love rests with belief and dedication, willingly Flowing softly like the breeze through the trees With giving and sacrifice, open as the sea Love rests in our hearts, always there for free To know this, act on this, to become it all Flowing like the soft breeze through the trees Love can lift us higher to places we don’t fall Love rests in places that are safe to be To know this, act on this, to become it all No shaking earthquake or storms to see Heidi Sands 8/7/17

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 8/9/2017 10:30:00 AM

Hi Heidi!:) Very beautiful Terzanelle piece you composed here! One of my many favorite forms, and I've written several myself over the years. I want to let you know that I think you're doing great writing in so many poetry styles:) I like it lot. Write on!:)) Be blessed!:)D.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2017 10:50:00 AM

Hi Dorian! Thank you for the encouraging support. I am grateful. Have a nice day, today :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/8/2017 4:26:00 AM

This is surely one of your best writes my friend, and it is a new form to you! Don't you just love the way it flows? I love Terzanelles, but I like Vilanelles better! Have you tried one of those yet? If you haven't try one! They are even more fun, but tough to master! I really enjoyed reading your tremendous poem here this morning (I'm a little late in responding)! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!