Lunita Blanca Poet Couplet

Love Reflections

What happens to love when too many years go by?
Does love remain alive or does love die?

Some say that love endures regardless of the years.
Yet why are hearts so sad and lonely and full of fears?

Does love grow like an oak tree or wither like cut flowers,
when their beauty starts to fade, is this the end of love?

Just ask the jilted lovers whose hopes and dreams have faded,
and now these lovers live their life alone and unaided.

Will they ever love again?

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Freddie Robinson Jr. December 11, 2018 at 5:31 PM Very keen insights, Arbol. Such a thought-provoking poem providing much food for thought. Excellent prose! May love light your path in life always. Lunita Blanca December 11, 2018 at 8:36 PM Freddie, thank you for your visit and wishes. Your poems are like the sunshine shinning through the dirty windows of our lives.

Constance La France December 3, 2018 at 8:58 AM Carlos, great write full of emotion, in my opinion the love does not fade in the heart even when the trust is broken, the love first felt has a special place forever, but the strength of the person is to turn away from a love and go on alone to love again ~ Lunita Blanca December 4, 2018 at 11:53 AM Perhaps true love can overcome suffering but not suspicion. Thank you for visiting.

Mahtab Bangalee November 29, 2018 at 11:33 PM thoughtful writing Lunita Blanca December 1, 2018 at 11:43 AM Thank you for your kind words.

Susan Ashley November 29, 2018 at 8:54 PM Your pensive poetry is beautifully reflective on the lifeblood of love. I think love responds to the way it’s cultivated: whether it grows like an oak or withers like cut flowers.. the style of cultivation depends on the two people in love. Your thoughtful mind inspires intriguing poetry, Carlos. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Lunita Blanca December 11, 2018 at 8:31 PM What else can we do when we love? Give more love. You have a heart of kindness Susan. Susan Ashley December 1, 2018 at 9:00 PM Your thoughts are deep and truly moving, Carlos, and we do indeed inspire each other. Lunita Blanca December 1, 2018 at 11:42 AM Thank you Susan. Your writes make me think of things forgotten.

Heidi Sands November 29, 2018 at 3:03 PM Well written Carlos. This gives the reader a lot to think about :) Lunita Blanca November 29, 2018 at 3:07 PM You are kind Heidi. Thanks for visiting.