Sotto Poet Poet Haiku

Love Quiet Spell - Hiku 23

Written: June 26, 2025, for contest by Brian Strand

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lilac w h i s p e r s      f
                                     a
                                          l
                                               l



beneath the       h          of your      g                                               
                    u       s                  a        z  ~
                         h                          e 


      l
  o      v      casts its   s
      e                              o
                                           f
                                                t    s-p-e-l-l

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Krishnanand Guptar July 3, 2025 at 1:34 PM Congratulations dear poet on your first place win in Brian`s contest with a lovely smooth write on the spell cast by love. Wish you a day full of love.

Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2025 at 2:40 PM Congrats in Brian's contest

Howard Kerr July 2, 2025 at 7:25 AM Congratulations Sotto, Imaginative, lyrical, enchanting piece. Clever shape devices reinforce theme Howard

Valsa George June 29, 2025 at 6:10 AM Wonderful shape and apt use of words make this haiku truly outstanding. I can feel love casting its soft spell. A true sensual delight.... !

Paige Hind June 28, 2025 at 4:11 PM I didn't see this one! Beautiful poem, Sotto.

Andrea Dietrich June 28, 2025 at 10:09 AM Sweet one, Sotto

Richard Lamoureux June 27, 2025 at 7:16 AM So artistic, a visual treat.

Hiya Sharma June 26, 2025 at 10:40 PM Wow!! What an outstanding shaped haiku this is, dear Sotto, your creativity is really on its highest here and I adore the wordsmithery you've so beautifully layered! The shape which you've designed especially for "fall" and everything.. ahh, beyond enchanting... such tender and heartfelt emotions conveyed in a mesmerizing way. "lilac whispers fall ... beneath the hush of your gaze" just beyond gorgeous.. so much said within a few words! Definitely one of my favourites from you! Keep writing!