Love Pure and Blind

The love is pure 
    The love is blind
   It is the feeling
  Which you cannot hide.

 The one you love is your moon
 And you there for them from morning to noon
 You want your love
 But dnt know how to disclose.
  
 You miss them every minute
 And wanna  listen their every pinnate
 Your live is true
 But dnt wanna proove.
  
  Your love is your best
  And you wanna feel the heat
  Your heart is not with you
 Because you want your love to be near you.

 Your love is pure
 But you don't wanna conquer
 You want to get sank
 But want a love which is Frank.
        
                     -Disha chaturvedi.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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June 23, 2016 at 10:42 PM
Dish, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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June 17, 2016 at 12:45 PM
- Very well written and lovely poem, Dish - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - // Sun :)
Chaturvedi Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 10:00 AM
Thnku so much..
Flower Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 11:22 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Dish. :)
Chaturvedi Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 8:42 PM
Thnku so much for such warm welcome...I always wanted a platform like this.
A  Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 6:27 AM
Dish, this is a tremendous way of sharing your thoughts, I'm so pleased, to read your very first post. Skat
Chaturvedi Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 8:42 PM
Thanks a lot...
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