Love Prayer

How i wish to love? 
It pains me to marrow to love 
Just like arrows in a row 
with the color of rainbow 
But a great pity 
I don't understand love 
O Lord create in me a new heart 
Craft in me a real thought 
For love i don't understand 
I can't undertake
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Golden Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 2:02 PM
NICE USE OF WORDS, awesome, i will read more of your poetry
Anish Avatar
July 28, 2012 at 5:25 PM
I like the sentiments in this work. You have a typo in this work - create not creat. Thank you for your kind words on my poetry. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Aderounmu Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 6:41 AM
Thanks a lot Matthew, i have fixed that. Cheers.
D'Rhymez Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 2:01 AM
hmmmn good write, keep your pen flowing. Chile
Aderounmu Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 6:43 AM
Thanks Chile.
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