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Love Potion

Genuine LOVE has a remedial effect if it is welcomed in by its acquaintances. A true medicinal gift in itself that has an ability to cure the most coveted of hearts. Whats sad about this world is that not everyone cares, even if one derives every essence of their being from his/her heart, the receiving end tends to concern themselves toiling with muddled debris and frivolous nonsense. A thriving epidemic drawn out of bewilderment and insensibility, stands alone, cold and naked pending. If only this fool knew that in his paradoxical state of mind he could be adorned with an unwavering and irrefutable antidote labeled number 9. A vulnerable state worth giving into to save the life of another, yours and mine. ~Sealion

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Date: 5/15/2015 9:50:00 AM
You are such a scintillating writer. Wow, these words are both solemn and hair-raising! Next time try to capture them in different stanzas, with a clear line division. Thus, the poem would have stood out so singularly well...77++!
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