Love Poetry

If only for a moment,
I could swoop you away.
I’d plan an entire night,
Easing the stress of the day.

Fresh cut roses in a vase,
And a candle lit dinner.
My mind races with thoughts,
And girl, you’re the winner.

Delve into this ecstasy,
For my love’s not a mirage.
After your lovely dinner,
I’d give you a massage.

Take the load off your feet,
And let my fingers flow.
Lets just sail away,
To wherever this may go.

I want to see you chill,
And clear out your head.
Relaxing with no worries,
As the best lies ahead.

With a cluster of grapes,
And a little red wine.
A hint of soft music,
For you to unwind.

Releasing your tension,
I like to see you smiling.
And the layers of fun,
Are just now compiling.

A late walk on the beach,
Unforgettable memories on sand.
I’d be your noble servant,
Every wish at your command.

If you need to get away,
Come spend an evening with me.
Our action’s would write a book,
Of the greatest love poetry.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chircop Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 8:03 AM
What a beauty.I miss this kind of poetry.
Fraser Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 2:42 PM
Wowee Raul, i am glad i clicked on this poem, its a gem, a diamond write from start to end. Thank you for writing this, James..
Frazier Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 6:49 PM
wow Raul. This one really stood out for me. if wishes came true, this would definitely explain the dream that i have longed for a lifetime. way to go. i have read alot of your work. thank you raul for your comment on my feature. I do appreciate it. blessings..............RAIN
Mineau Avatar
April 2, 2009 at 4:09 PM
I LOVED IT!!!!! i wish my b-friend would do all that stuff for me....lol.your a good righter. the way it just flows off the tung. some of the rymes were expected though. i mean that i knew what words you were gonna ryme with next but other then that its artwork made of words
Jimenez Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 5:13 PM
makes me think of the misses... -thanks
Edmonds Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 10:18 AM
A true romantic at heart you are, for your work and yours.
Moreno Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 2:28 AM
Nice title.............Danielle
Goombi Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 1:51 AM
Charming lines.
Neal Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 7:41 PM
Romantic write, lovely words. Love E.
Martin Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 10:58 PM
Very romantic and nicely said. Tyler
Strand Avatar
March 18, 2009 at 6:20 AM
Thank you for your comment on my blog Rau.Rgds Brian
Higgins Avatar
March 18, 2009 at 5:49 AM
Love the last stanza brother...I want to read that book..LOL..great piece of love.
Schermerhorn Avatar
March 17, 2009 at 4:42 PM
this was so so beautiful Raul wow very romantic one could get simply lost in your wonderful words.
Atanacio Avatar
March 17, 2009 at 5:15 AM
I really don't like reading too much Love poetry, but i'm glad I read this one-- it was very well done :)
Reynolds Avatar
March 17, 2009 at 2:27 AM
Sounds delightful, Raul. love, Kristin
David Avatar
March 17, 2009 at 12:55 AM
WOW!!! This is so good! I enjoyed it so much. Wathuto
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