Love Poem

Every day and night I look up to the sky,
Always wondering why
It couldn’t always be you and I-
Sure it may seem frivolous to feel so deeply connected
To someone who’s not on this planet
Someone who has left what feels like long ago-
4 years later and I lament
Screaming “I love you” to the sky
My heart is bleeding – why?
A part of me lost forever, or are you still around?
My heart gets heavy when I say your name-
Yet I smile- a constant game
my head fights my heart
memories verse reality-
What I would do to restart-
Cherishing every moment, good, bad 
Letting my heart succumb to diastole
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 5/15/2018 5:18:00 PM
Love is torment For the loser And 4 years can seem like yesterday In diastolic purgatory
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Date: 4/11/2018 11:57:00 PM
Very lovely, Sarah. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Sarah Casey
Date: 5/24/2018 1:42:00 PM
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Date: 4/7/2018 2:13:00 PM
It s a really beautiful but sad poem, there s nothing worse than a incomplete love, it destroys you, both mentally and physically, it s when you started to get in depression, thinking of memories with your partner that shall never happen, and that s when you ll hate life and started to be in a world of dreams, always remember that tou shall be reunited with him in heaven, this life is a test, he has passed it, now it s yours time, pass it, it s well deserved poem
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Date: 5/24/2018 1:42:00 PM
Thank you kindly for your words, I truly appreciate it and feel as though you understood completely what I am going through losing my beloved.
Date: 4/7/2018 2:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful but sad poem.
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Date: 4/5/2018 9:14:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest Sarah. Congratulations for your win! :)
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Sarah Casey
Date: 4/5/2018 1:48:00 PM
Thank you very very much :)
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