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Love Patrol

love has come and shot me down. drowning in my own lust i cant move or make a sound. i've always been modest the person to always speak. for some reason, though, love has made me weak! i reported the incident to the local love patrol but instead of defending me, they made me pay a toll. "love is a priviledge, and you seem to be selected." "dont question why you....just love him and be respected." dang, i guess that was true to me. the love patrol had been paid to protect the love that shot me!!!

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Date: 3/30/2010 4:38:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Queshia. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2010 6:46:00 PM
My poem poetry police is fun to read . Like your lovr patrol. I super this one I love the tittle..P.D.
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