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Love Orchestrated By God

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Laying in bed next to my wife whose asleep,

I begin to reflect on the first

time we fell in love...

Starting with our first kiss that took place out of town. (San Antonio)

And from that moment we were on cloud nine.

but during our parted ways after two years, she remained not giving up hope

We managed to get back together :)

And for that reason, she now bears my last name giving birth to my first child. (boy) :)

And as she continues to sleep, I'm holding her tight while thanking God for bringing us together.

Love you babe...this is for you!

Abed this angelic night bound by quiescent beauty, yearned thoughts of whence the birth of our yester-years proclaiming loves first scene waltzes through thy interior monologue. In great measure is our immediate kiss miles away on the outskirts of different land. Persuading life on end to amble midst ninth cloud holding hands. Oh how this instant she remained taking form as treasures in favor of thy last name. Enraptured at moment is her warmth skin embraced with mine...(SIGH) Fingers extend, tracing single by single the tears about thy face...knowing that love at last came upon its indissoluble place. Thank you God for orchestrating our lives this way. Pace, INK-U-SCRIPT 11-04-2014 Read about Poem

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Juanita Smalls

Date: 2/16/2020 9:09:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful Pace. Thank you for sharing this.

Carla Ingram

Date: 11/27/2019 2:53:00 AM

Very inspirng

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 11/27/2019 5:06:00 AM

Thank you dearly Carla!!!! :)

Jt Nyx

Date: 11/5/2019 1:40:00 PM

Beautiful write, Enjoyed the love story of your life shared. Keep up the wonderful creativity. Jess

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 11/5/2019 1:42:00 PM

Thanks Jess for the kind visit and comment...I really appreciate it! :)

Vegter Papyrus

Date: 9/27/2019 7:18:00 AM

Cherish every moment that God has given you two. Let nothing come between, and good remain the head...you'll stay blessed!

Richard Nnoli

Date: 11/8/2016 10:56:00 AM

This is a beautiful poem bro, Richard

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/13/2016 5:10:00 PM

I enjoyed and sank to your nice piece. Congrats Pace

Skat A

Date: 6/30/2016 10:31:00 AM

When are you going to post a new poem? Thanks for the charming visit. Skat

Skat A
Date: 6/30/2016 10:09:00 PM

Ha, you got me

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/30/2016 11:22:00 AM

The question is when are you going to post another one Ms. Goodbye..lol

Britney Kimbrough

Date: 6/30/2016 4:34:00 AM

REALLY GOOD WRITER

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/30/2016 5:12:00 AM

Wow...thank you..that's definitely some inspiration to keep writing. :)

Passion Eye

Date: 6/28/2016 7:49:00 AM

beautiful....

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/27/2016 4:11:00 PM

Nice to see you back, ...;) I'm glad to see your new avatar;) Luv...Linda

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/27/2016 3:22:00 PM

i am so liking the gentle tonality of your piece.... how soothing, marl.. whoo and huggs. amen!

Ronny Madonsela

Date: 4/7/2016 9:04:00 AM

Just stopping by and i stumble upon this beautiful gem . Its nice to see you are still creating a this soulful world through your poems , its what made me miss the soup family while i was way. Great write Marlon !!! **RON**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/26/2015 12:18:00 AM

As beautiful as I remember the poem, when i first read it a long while back. Hope you are well, enjoying the family. LINDA

Delli Thami

Date: 4/17/2015 4:43:00 PM

what a beautiful write and a beautiful peice celebrating your love. peace and blessing to the both of you.! - Lisa

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/14/2015 11:59:00 AM

Great work with the magic touch of a free soaring poetic heart. Emile. #7

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/6/2015 2:55:00 PM

Just coming back to say thank you for dropping in on my side ;) you and your wife have a beautiful child ;) give him a hug from me. Be blessed

Kenisha Shines

Date: 12/16/2014 12:19:00 PM

beautiful write ,have a happy life together

Twanna Irisha

Date: 12/2/2014 5:05:00 PM

SO SO BEAUTIFUL!!!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/12/2014 7:44:00 PM

A beautiful touching piece. What could be more joyous than true love and baby makes three. Just wonderful a fav for me.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/7/2014 2:13:00 PM

This is heartfelt and romantic, Pace. You have to be truly in love to write words such as these! Congrats to the proud parents! // paul

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/6/2014 7:07:00 AM

Such a beautiful piece celebrating your love for each other. Really happy for the both of you :) Wishing you the best with the addition to your family as well :)

Jasmine Cruz

Date: 11/6/2014 4:56:00 AM

very nice tribute Pace. ty for letting us see your fine work

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/6/2014 3:19:00 AM

such sweet sweet heartfelt tribute.. :D wow.. how wonderful it is.. :) God bless your marriage and I pray this time that still you will share many happy years.. :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/5/2014 7:34:00 PM

this is so heart touching beautifully penned piece golden picture painted bless you both

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 11/5/2014 11:12:00 AM

I would like to thank all the supporters on my wife's Facebook account...thank you sooo much for the likes and comments!!!!