Pace Ink-U-Script Poet Free verse

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Laying in bed next to my wife whose asleep,

I begin to reflect on the first

time we fell in love...

Starting with our first kiss that took place out of town. (San Antonio)

And from that moment we were on cloud nine.

but during our parted ways after two years, she remained not giving up hope

We managed to get back together :)

And for that reason, she now bears my last name giving birth to my first child. (boy)  :)

And as she continues to sleep, I'm holding her tight while thanking God for bringing us together.

Love you babe...this is for you!

Love Orchestrated By God

Abed this angelic night bound by quiescent beauty,
yearned thoughts of whence the birth
of our yester-years proclaiming
loves first scene waltzes
through thy interior
monologue. In great
measure is our
immediate
kiss miles away
on the outskirts of
different land. Persuading
life on end to amble
midst ninth cloud holding
hands. Oh how this 
instant she
remained
taking form
as treasures in
favor of thy last name.
Enraptured at moment is
her warmth skin embraced
with mine...(SIGH) Fingers extend,
tracing single by single the tears about thy face...knowing that love at last
came upon its indissoluble place. Thank you God for orchestrating our lives this way.


Pace, INK-U-SCRIPT
11-04-2014

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Juanita Smalls February 16, 2020 at 9:09 PM Absolutely beautiful Pace. Thank you for sharing this.

Carla Ingram November 27, 2019 at 2:53 AM Very inspirng Pace Ink-U-Script November 27, 2019 at 5:06 AM Thank you dearly Carla!!!! :)

Jessica Thompson November 5, 2019 at 1:40 PM Beautiful write, Enjoyed the love story of your life shared. Keep up the wonderful creativity. Jess Pace Ink-U-Script November 5, 2019 at 1:42 PM Thanks Jess for the kind visit and comment...I really appreciate it! :)

Vegter Papyrus September 27, 2019 at 7:18 AM Cherish every moment that God has given you two. Let nothing come between, and good remain the head...you'll stay blessed!

Richard Nnoli November 8, 2016 at 10:56 AM This is a beautiful poem bro, Richard

Anisha Dutta August 13, 2016 at 5:10 PM I enjoyed and sank to your nice piece. Congrats Pace

Skat A June 30, 2016 at 10:31 AM When are you going to post a new poem? Thanks for the charming visit. Skat Skat A June 30, 2016 at 10:09 PM Ha, you got me Pace Ink-U-Script June 30, 2016 at 11:22 AM The question is when are you going to post another one Ms. Goodbye..lol

Br3e K. R. June 30, 2016 at 4:34 AM REALLY GOOD WRITER Pace Ink-U-Script June 30, 2016 at 5:12 AM Wow...thank you..that's definitely some inspiration to keep writing. :)

Passion Eye June 28, 2016 at 7:49 AM beautiful....

Poet Destroyer A June 27, 2016 at 4:11 PM Nice to see you back, ...;) I'm glad to see your new avatar;) Luv...Linda

Nette Onclaud June 27, 2016 at 3:22 PM i am so liking the gentle tonality of your piece.... how soothing, marl.. whoo and huggs. amen!

Ronny Madonsela April 7, 2016 at 9:04 AM Just stopping by and i stumble upon this beautiful gem . Its nice to see you are still creating a this soulful world through your poems , its what made me miss the soup family while i was way. Great write Marlon !!! **RON**

Poet Destroyer A October 26, 2015 at 12:18 AM As beautiful as I remember the poem, when i first read it a long while back. Hope you are well, enjoying the family. LINDA

Delli Thami April 17, 2015 at 4:43 PM what a beautiful write and a beautiful peice celebrating your love. peace and blessing to the both of you.! - Lisa

Emile Pinet April 14, 2015 at 11:59 AM Great work with the magic touch of a free soaring poetic heart. Emile. #7

Wilma Neels April 6, 2015 at 2:55 PM Just coming back to say thank you for dropping in on my side ;) you and your wife have a beautiful child ;) give him a hug from me. Be blessed

Kenisha Shines December 16, 2014 at 12:19 PM beautiful write ,have a happy life together

Twanna Irisha December 2, 2014 at 5:05 PM SO SO BEAUTIFUL!!!

Maurice Yvonne November 12, 2014 at 7:44 PM A beautiful touching piece. What could be more joyous than true love and baby makes three. Just wonderful a fav for me.

Paul Callus November 7, 2014 at 2:13 PM This is heartfelt and romantic, Pace. You have to be truly in love to write words such as these! Congrats to the proud parents! // paul

Wilma Neels November 6, 2014 at 7:07 AM Such a beautiful piece celebrating your love for each other. Really happy for the both of you :) Wishing you the best with the addition to your family as well :)

Jasmine Cruz November 6, 2014 at 4:56 AM very nice tribute Pace. ty for letting us see your fine work

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 6, 2014 at 3:19 AM such sweet sweet heartfelt tribute.. :D wow.. how wonderful it is.. :) God bless your marriage and I pray this time that still you will share many happy years.. :)

Liam Mcdaid November 5, 2014 at 7:34 PM this is so heart touching beautifully penned piece golden picture painted bless you both

Pace Ink-U-Script November 5, 2014 at 11:12 AM I would like to thank all the supporters on my wife's Facebook account...thank you sooo much for the likes and comments!!!!

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