Notes About The Poem

Mum takes little son to barbers. Son hates a haircut!

Love Or Hate Minichu

trust barber with your head
sharp weapons in her hand are tools to help her plan
wont be dead

watch the mirrors
she shapes your looks as best as can
scissors

meanwhile
stay still young man
smile

trust barber with your head
she shapes your looks as best as can
smile

13th placement
Written 28/02/2021
Mohan Chutani’s Minichu on love or hate
syllables and rhyme as per the rules
Children fear a haircut like this child and takes his mother along
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Y. Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 8:43 AM
Hi Krish, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 9:06 AM
Thanks Alexis!
Fowler Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 6:40 AM
Oh so very cute Krish. Congratulations on the win! Linda
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 9:05 AM
Thanks Linda!
Chutani Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 3:45 AM
Krish, thanx for participating in my contest. Enjoyed how you equated trust in the lady barber with love. Congrats for your placement in my contest. Best Mohan.
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 3:55 AM
Thanks Mohan! I am delighted you liked it. I wanted to show there are many other aspects to love and hate! Delighted!
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