Love Or Hate Minichu

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Mum takes little son to barbers. Son hates a haircut!

trust barber with your head
sharp weapons in her hand are tools to help her plan
wont be dead

watch the mirrors
she shapes your looks as best as can
scissors

meanwhile
stay still young man
smile

trust barber with your head
she shapes your looks as best as can
smile

13th placement
Written 28/02/2021
Mohan Chutani’s Minichu on love or hate
syllables and rhyme as per the rules
Children fear a haircut like this child and takes his mother along

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Alexis Y.

Date: 3/5/2021 8:43:00 AM

Hi Krish, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/5/2021 9:06:00 AM

Thanks Alexis!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/5/2021 6:40:00 AM

Oh so very cute Krish. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/5/2021 9:05:00 AM

Thanks Linda!

Mohan Chutani

Date: 3/5/2021 3:45:00 AM

Krish, thanx for participating in my contest. Enjoyed how you equated trust in the lady barber with love. Congrats for your placement in my contest. Best Mohan.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/5/2021 3:55:00 AM

Thanks Mohan! I am delighted you liked it. I wanted to show there are many other aspects to love and hate! Delighted!