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Love Or Hate Minichu

Love, hate, strong emotions 
feeding on each other, quite inseparable
twin notions

produce twists, turns
a dynamism adorable
heart churns

Love, hate
life bearable
fate

Love, hate, strong emotions 
a dynamism adorable
fate

13.2.2021
Note: My example on: Let's Minichu on Love or Hate

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Valsa George Date: 2/16/2022 3:57:00 AM Minichu is a new form of poetry I understand with a lot of specifications. Still you have done a great job here, dear poet friend ! Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 3/5/2021 1:58:00 PM Love your example, Mohan. Wrote for your contest , but was late to enter it is called Surrendered Love. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Mohan Chutani Date: 4/3/2021 6:51:00 AM Glad you wrote one. Sorry, could have extended date but did not know that more entries would come. Best. Mohan

Beata Agustin Date: 3/5/2021 3:05:00 AM Thanks for sharing this. Likewise, thanks so much for the placement, albeit my departure from the rules. I already edited the second line of stanzas 2, 3, and 4 after learning from my mistake. God bless you. Login to Reply

Barbara Barry-Nishanian Date: 2/23/2021 12:26:00 AM I don't get it? What is "Minichu"? Found no explanation anywhere. How is it different....is it free verse? you can soup mail me if don't add more instructions to the contest. Maybe I am just too old. Login to Reply Mohan Chutani Date: 3/3/2021 1:49:00 AM Repeating here again Minichu format: Total 12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each) Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 4th stanza consists of repeat of: 1st line of stanza 1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3, Stanza 2: 4,8,2, Stanza 3: 2,4,1, Stanza 4: 6,8,1 Mohan Chutani Date: 3/3/2021 1:48:00 AM Instructions are there in the update.