Mohan Chutani Poet Rhyme

Love Or Hate Minichu

Love, hate, strong emotions 
feeding on each other, quite inseparable
twin notions

produce twists, turns
a dynamism adorable
heart churns

Love, hate
life bearable
fate

Love, hate, strong emotions 
a dynamism adorable
fate

13.2.2021
Note: My example on: Let's Minichu on Love or Hate

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Valsa George February 16, 2022 at 3:57 AM Minichu is a new form of poetry I understand with a lot of specifications. Still you have done a great job here, dear poet friend !

Eve Roper March 5, 2021 at 1:58 PM Love your example, Mohan. Wrote for your contest , but was late to enter it is called Surrendered Love. Hugs Eve Mohan Chutani April 3, 2021 at 6:51 AM Glad you wrote one. Sorry, could have extended date but did not know that more entries would come. Best. Mohan

Beata Agustin March 5, 2021 at 3:05 AM Thanks for sharing this. Likewise, thanks so much for the placement, albeit my departure from the rules. I already edited the second line of stanzas 2, 3, and 4 after learning from my mistake. God bless you.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian February 23, 2021 at 12:26 AM I don't get it? What is "Minichu"? Found no explanation anywhere. How is it different....is it free verse? you can soup mail me if don't add more instructions to the contest. Maybe I am just too old. Mohan Chutani March 3, 2021 at 1:49 AM Repeating here again Minichu format: Total 12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each) Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 4th stanza consists of repeat of: 1st line of stanza 1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3, Stanza 2: 4,8,2, Stanza 3: 2,4,1, Stanza 4: 6,8,1 Mohan Chutani March 3, 2021 at 1:48 AM Instructions are there in the update.