Jenna Logan Poet Rhyme

Love Or Hate Minichu

Desire sparked and we kissed
When I pleaded, "No. Please stop," he became irate
I resist

Struggle; conflict
Instincts started to escalate
I kicked

Rampage
Consumed with hate
Rage

Desire sparked and we kissed
Instincts started to escalate
Rage



February 7, 2021
Love or Hate Minichu
Sponsor: Mohan Chutani

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Alexis Y. March 5, 2021 at 8:35 AM Hi Jenna, Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Paula Goldsmith March 5, 2021 at 6:36 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write and picture. Have a blessed day writing away.............

Linda Alice Fowler March 5, 2021 at 6:34 AM Hi Jenna. This is a really good one...desire turned violent :) Congratulations on the win! Linda

Mohan Chutani March 5, 2021 at 3:21 AM Jenna, thanx for participating in my contest. You displayed how love, desire, hate, intermingle in our emotions and difficult to separate. Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan.

Caren Krutsinger February 8, 2021 at 9:54 PM You certainly have existed both sides of the feeling realm in this terrific missive Jenna. Jenna Logan February 9, 2021 at 1:13 AM Thanks so much, Caren.

Mark Koplin February 7, 2021 at 6:32 PM Well written Jenna, that is sure love and hate. Jenna Logan February 9, 2021 at 1:12 AM It is. Thank you, Mark.

Victor Buhagiar February 7, 2021 at 8:31 AM Marvellous battle of desires. Loved it. ~~ Jenna Logan February 7, 2021 at 9:02 AM Surely, it was that! Thanks so much for leaving me your kind thoughts, Victor.

JC Brul February 7, 2021 at 7:28 AM Stunning piece Jenna!!and you did it effortlessly!! Jenna Logan February 7, 2021 at 9:01 AM Well, I must confess, JCB, I flubbed it yesterday, but I'm happy with this one, albeit of hate and not love. Thank you for the nice comments.

David Kavanagh February 7, 2021 at 7:10 AM Yesterday’s one was fantastic Jenna, I was surprised you changed it around, but I understand these days with all the conflict going on, I had a brush with it myself, so let off some steam tooanother great write here, it’s a mind boggling form for me anyway, best of luck in the contest, cheers David Jenna Logan February 7, 2021 at 9:00 AM I agree, David. Superficial and/or replicated comments have no value. Political poems have become blase' and although everyone has an opinion, must it be so blatantly argued? David Kavanagh February 7, 2021 at 8:48 AM Some of the poems and comments I’ve been browsing over recently, are so plastic and fawning, some sycophantic whilst others almost diva like, and the only underlying common denominator being, extreme right wing and ultra conservative views, everything else dismissed out of hand, very strange for a poetry site, cheers David Jenna Logan February 7, 2021 at 7:16 AM Thank you for excusing me for my faux pas in yesterday's posted Minichu, but it was faulty. Although I'd much rather write of romance, today's write took a bitter turn. I've no idea what bothered you yesterday, but I'm sorry to hear you had a problem.

Rama Balasubramanian February 7, 2021 at 5:28 AM You did this very well. Not an easy form. Enjoy your weekend. Take care Rama Jenna Logan February 7, 2021 at 5:53 AM Thanks a lot, Rama. It's not easy, and I totally screwed up my initial write, despite the fact that I've written several before this one. My imperfections on display.

Tom Cunningham February 7, 2021 at 3:45 AM Im waiting for Sonny and Cher to start singing? I could swear I commented on this yesterday or was it the day before? Romance is in the air. Enjoy your Sunday Tom. Jenna Logan February 7, 2021 at 4:13 AM I Got You Babe or, All I really wanna do, is baby be friends with you? lol You did comment on a Minichu I posted yesterday...a very romantic one, but my form was off, so I had to start anew with a different approach. I went with hate. Thank you for your patience with me, Tom. Have a great Sunday. Hope yours will be sunny and bright.