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Love Or Hate Minichu

Desire sparked and we kissed When I pleaded, "No. Please stop," he became irate I resist Struggle; conflict Instincts started to escalate I kicked Rampage Consumed with hate Rage Desire sparked and we kissed Instincts started to escalate Rage February 7, 2021 Love or Hate Minichu Sponsor: Mohan Chutani

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Alexis Y.

Date: 3/5/2021 8:35:00 AM

Hi Jenna, Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/5/2021 6:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write and picture. Have a blessed day writing away.............

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/5/2021 6:34:00 AM

Hi Jenna. This is a really good one...desire turned violent :) Congratulations on the win! Linda

Mohan Chutani

Date: 3/5/2021 3:21:00 AM

Jenna, thanx for participating in my contest. You displayed how love, desire, hate, intermingle in our emotions and difficult to separate. Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/8/2021 9:54:00 PM

You certainly have existed both sides of the feeling realm in this terrific missive Jenna.

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/9/2021 1:13:00 AM

Thanks so much, Caren.

Mark Koplin

Date: 2/7/2021 6:32:00 PM

Well written Jenna, that is sure love and hate.

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/9/2021 1:12:00 AM

It is. Thank you, Mark.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/7/2021 8:31:00 AM

Marvellous battle of desires. Loved it. ~~

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/7/2021 9:02:00 AM

Surely, it was that! Thanks so much for leaving me your kind thoughts, Victor.

Jcb Brul

Date: 2/7/2021 7:28:00 AM

Stunning piece Jenna!!and you did it effortlessly!!

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/7/2021 9:01:00 AM

Well, I must confess, JCB, I flubbed it yesterday, but I'm happy with this one, albeit of hate and not love. Thank you for the nice comments.

David Kavanagh

Date: 2/7/2021 7:10:00 AM

Yesterday’s one was fantastic Jenna, I was surprised you changed it around, but I understand these days with all the conflict going on, I had a brush with it myself, so let off some steam tooanother great write here, it’s a mind boggling form for me anyway, best of luck in the contest, cheers David

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/7/2021 9:00:00 AM

I agree, David. Superficial and/or replicated comments have no value. Political poems have become blase' and although everyone has an opinion, must it be so blatantly argued?

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/7/2021 8:48:00 AM

Some of the poems and comments I’ve been browsing over recently, are so plastic and fawning, some sycophantic whilst others almost diva like, and the only underlying common denominator being, extreme right wing and ultra conservative views, everything else dismissed out of hand, very strange for a poetry site, cheers David

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/7/2021 7:16:00 AM

Thank you for excusing me for my faux pas in yesterday's posted Minichu, but it was faulty. Although I'd much rather write of romance, today's write took a bitter turn. I've no idea what bothered you yesterday, but I'm sorry to hear you had a problem.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 2/7/2021 5:28:00 AM

You did this very well. Not an easy form. Enjoy your weekend. Take care Rama

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/7/2021 5:53:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Rama. It's not easy, and I totally screwed up my initial write, despite the fact that I've written several before this one. My imperfections on display.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/7/2021 3:45:00 AM

Im waiting for Sonny and Cher to start singing? I could swear I commented on this yesterday or was it the day before? Romance is in the air. Enjoy your Sunday Tom.

Jenna Logan
Date: 2/7/2021 4:13:00 AM

I Got You Babe or, All I really wanna do, is baby be friends with you? lol You did comment on a Minichu I posted yesterday...a very romantic one, but my form was off, so I had to start anew with a different approach. I went with hate. Thank you for your patience with me, Tom. Have a great Sunday. Hope yours will be sunny and bright.