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Love Or Hate Minichu

Desire sparked and we kissed
When I pleaded, "No. Please stop," he became irate
I resist

Struggle; conflict
Instincts started to escalate
I kicked

Rampage
Consumed with hate
Rage

Desire sparked and we kissed
Instincts started to escalate
Rage



February 7, 2021
Love or Hate Minichu
Sponsor: Mohan Chutani

Copyright © Jenna Logan | Year Posted 2021

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Alexis Y. Date: 3/5/2021 8:35:00 AM Hi Jenna, Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/5/2021 6:36:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write and picture. Have a blessed day writing away............. Login to Reply

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 3/5/2021 6:34:00 AM Hi Jenna. This is a really good one...desire turned violent :) Congratulations on the win! Linda Login to Reply

Mohan Chutani Date: 3/5/2021 3:21:00 AM Jenna, thanx for participating in my contest. You displayed how love, desire, hate, intermingle in our emotions and difficult to separate. Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan. Login to Reply

Caren Krutsinger Date: 2/8/2021 9:54:00 PM You certainly have existed both sides of the feeling realm in this terrific missive Jenna. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 2/9/2021 1:13:00 AM Thanks so much, Caren.

Mark Koplin Date: 2/7/2021 6:32:00 PM Well written Jenna, that is sure love and hate. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 2/9/2021 1:12:00 AM It is. Thank you, Mark.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 2/7/2021 8:31:00 AM Marvellous battle of desires. Loved it. ~~ Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 2/7/2021 9:02:00 AM Surely, it was that! Thanks so much for leaving me your kind thoughts, Victor.

JCB Brul Date: 2/7/2021 7:28:00 AM Stunning piece Jenna!!and you did it effortlessly!! Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 2/7/2021 9:01:00 AM Well, I must confess, JCB, I flubbed it yesterday, but I'm happy with this one, albeit of hate and not love. Thank you for the nice comments.

David Kavanagh Date: 2/7/2021 7:10:00 AM Yesterday’s one was fantastic Jenna, I was surprised you changed it around, but I understand these days with all the conflict going on, I had a brush with it myself, so let off some steam tooanother great write here, it’s a mind boggling form for me anyway, best of luck in the contest, cheers David Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 2/7/2021 9:00:00 AM I agree, David. Superficial and/or replicated comments have no value. Political poems have become blase' and although everyone has an opinion, must it be so blatantly argued? David Kavanagh Date: 2/7/2021 8:48:00 AM Some of the poems and comments I’ve been browsing over recently, are so plastic and fawning, some sycophantic whilst others almost diva like, and the only underlying common denominator being, extreme right wing and ultra conservative views, everything else dismissed out of hand, very strange for a poetry site, cheers David Jenna Logan Date: 2/7/2021 7:16:00 AM Thank you for excusing me for my faux pas in yesterday's posted Minichu, but it was faulty. Although I'd much rather write of romance, today's write took a bitter turn. I've no idea what bothered you yesterday, but I'm sorry to hear you had a problem.

Rama Balasubramanian Date: 2/7/2021 5:28:00 AM You did this very well. Not an easy form. Enjoy your weekend. Take care Rama Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 2/7/2021 5:53:00 AM Thanks a lot, Rama. It's not easy, and I totally screwed up my initial write, despite the fact that I've written several before this one. My imperfections on display.

Tom Cunningham Date: 2/7/2021 3:45:00 AM Im waiting for Sonny and Cher to start singing? I could swear I commented on this yesterday or was it the day before? Romance is in the air. Enjoy your Sunday Tom. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 2/7/2021 4:13:00 AM I Got You Babe or, All I really wanna do, is baby be friends with you? lol You did comment on a Minichu I posted yesterday...a very romantic one, but my form was off, so I had to start anew with a different approach. I went with hate. Thank you for your patience with me, Tom. Have a great Sunday. Hope yours will be sunny and bright.