Paula Swanson Poet Triolet

Love On Track

She left her heart there, on the tracks,
walked away, without a backwards glance.
If love were true, then it'd come back.
She left her heart there, on the tracks.
Tied with ribbon of pale lilac,
her letter of love, left to chance.
She left her heart there, on the tracks.
Walked away, without a backwards glance.


Paula Swanson
8/8/2011
For the contest, In The Afterglow
Sponsored by Nette Onclaud
Placement: 6th

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Jack Horne August 15, 2011 at 2:24 PM Many congratulations on all your wins, Paula : )

Nette Onclaud August 15, 2011 at 11:58 AM sweet congrats , paula... i was beholden to your "tied with ribbon of pale lilac" and all... hope you'll read my new contest and see if you are up to it.. ;) huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown August 15, 2011 at 10:39 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "In The Afterglow" contest Paula. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta August 14, 2011 at 8:36 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Paula

John Freeman August 14, 2011 at 5:38 PM Paula, Great to see your poem doing well in Nette's contest. Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 14, 2011 at 4:29 PM Congrats Paula on sixth place win in Nette's contest with this exquisite entry my friend.. luv..

Sara Kendrick August 9, 2011 at 6:58 PM Good luck in the contest with this one about that fear of loosing one's heart in love..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

Joseph Osita August 9, 2011 at 5:24 AM What an excellent take on the photo? Very nice and creative! Best wishes!