Love On the Rocks

You baby are the first and last warm thought 
on my mind, each and every single day 
I want to lie beside you, nuzzle up 
real close falling asleep listening 
to your gentle heartbeats drum, slowly strum 
Rolling doors open, to a princess gem 
rare clear cut, one of the finest beauties
Sweet crowning regal, in the heart blossoms
flowering feelings explode, they now start 
shining much brighter, in your petals touch 


My sunshine satin warm fingers touching 
emotions confetti sprinkle ruby 
inside fires up, in light of every single one 
Silent whispering living echo in a breeze
floating on wings of love, you're the heart and soul gem 
Thinking deeply treasure of the deepest ocean 
you rock the waves rising then crashing at your feet

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About this poem:
10 syllable by 10 syllable one in a hundred
then 10 syllable rising to twelve midnight dreams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/1/2014 8:58:00 PM
Liam, lovely. I especially like the gentle heart beats drum. Very nice write. Meg
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/13/2015 6:40:00 PM
thank you meg wonderful comment dear pal deeply appreciated bless you
Date: 11/25/2014 1:36:00 PM
very nice :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 2:39:00 PM
thank you so kindly kc for the very beautiful comment
Date: 11/25/2014 11:04:00 AM
Wild are the crashing waves -- but the love you speak of is gentle as rain. . . you are the love-master.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 2:45:00 PM
yeah david reminds me of white steeds galloping yeah the love is deep smiling thank you kindly dear friend bless you
Date: 11/25/2014 10:04:00 AM
So very beautiful my very dear friend Liam. This very awesome poem speaks so much to ones heart about the beauty of true love and all that this magnificent wonderful feeling, word really implies and means.I really love it! Your pen is superb golden! A 7 from me! Have a very lovely day and God bless you always! :) Love and Hugs! ^o^ xxxxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/25/2014 2:51:00 PM
thank you so kindly dorian dear friend wonderful comment bless you
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