Love on the rocks

Another sunset kissed the ocean before going to sleep. Another moon to welcome lovers to meet. Saturday night, love promises under the dancing lights. Awakenings next to a stranger happens when somebody lies. Perhaps the wine on the rocks in the wrong spot made us brighter. Solid rocks can break down while thin trees are stronger. Another sunrise will kiss our battle. We are not strangers fighting for our love. We are king and queen living in our castle.

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/26/2024 11:17:00 PM

Loved your imagery and the happy conclusion. Would we live in such harmony? Hugs.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/27/2024 12:58:00 AM

It would be nice Victor. Better to dream, it's free. Have a nice week my friend!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/25/2024 4:47:00 PM

I loved the depth of your words with such subtle phrases as "Awakenings next to a stranger happens when somebody lies." I find that's true and a bit unnerving. I also liked We are not strangers fighting for our love. We are king and queen living in our castle Your poem addresses the complexities of relationships--not an easy topic. Well done...have a splendid evening, hugs, Sara

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/25/2024 5:09:00 PM

That's what it is life for many people...unnerving. Not everybody live the wonderful life that deserve

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/25/2024 5:02:00 PM

Thank you my dear Sara. I appreciate your lovely comment. Have a nice eveningxxx