Love On the Dark Side

You senselessly hurt me,
     Then, demand I do not cry.

You frustrate me,
     Then, unsympathetically punish my display of anger.

You ridicule me,
     Then, taunt me when I strive
     to win your approval.

You swear long-standing tribal love and protection,
     Then, crush my small, unprotected heart with indifference.

You set impossible goals,
     Then, painstakingly dismantle my ego.

You demonstrate blatant distain,
     Then, draw me inside your dark, secret circle.

You demand the obscene use of my disarmoured sheath,
     Then, discard the confused Soul indwelling.

Who taught you how to love on the Dark Side?

Were you not once also a child,
     Alone, and frightened in the whispering darkness?

Did you not once also smile, laugh and sing?

Who taught you to hide your innocence,
     In the filmy guise of unrequited bravery?

A male child cries hauntingly,
     In the background of my dreams.

If children learn what they live,
     Who taught you to love on the Dark Side?

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Date: 6/24/2017 6:03:00 PM
Thanks very much for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. I will certainly read yours as well and let you know what I think. Best wishes for your success as a poet, and welcome to the poetrysoup site.
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Date: 6/15/2017 3:43:00 PM
A very beautiful written poem, thier are some men in world who like to beat the women just because they can t protect themselves, those men are worse because they hurt someone who is weak and can t even defend them, I really like your poem and truly wish that God protect everyone from such men however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 5/26/2016 7:18:00 PM
Chula, I like this very much. SKAT
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Date: 4/24/2017 12:15:00 PM
Hi, SKAT! Nice to hear from you. Thanks very much for your feedback. I appreciate it!
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