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Love On A Pillow

If I could put love on a pillow I’d lay it on your bed for you to find there every night and rest your weary head To set your dreams in motion and make your world carefree for you to know your value for you to finally see If I could put love on a pillow there’d be no need for prose for all your pain, you’d understand that thorns protect the rose You’d wake to smiles and sunshine with kindness on your plate to know the road is long but never it’s too late

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 1/1/2022 7:54:00 PM
Mike, You must have found true love, I feel that it would be impossible to pen such sensitivity and passion if this was not so. Great poetry, Thank you.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/2/2022 2:45:00 PM
Shirley, you are so kind with your words! Thanks so much!
Date: 12/15/2021 7:59:00 PM
"Thorns protect the rose" Yes, they do. Such a beautiful thought. So tender. *Love on a Pillow* This is so romantic and dreamy. I would never let go. Your thoughts curl gently around me and my heart. :) Brandy
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/16/2021 3:54:00 AM
As such a true romantic yourself, I am so flattered that it resonated with you Brandy! Thanks and Happy Wednesday!!!
Date: 12/15/2021 9:14:00 AM
Ah, this is a fine one, my friend. I love the way it flowed from the beginning to the end, with marvelous rhymes. Good writing on a time-honored theme.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/15/2021 1:15:00 PM
Thanks so much Milton!
Date: 12/15/2021 5:13:00 AM
How loved I would feel to have someone say such affectionate words to me. Befitting a Hallmark Valentine's Day card, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/15/2021 8:59:00 AM
Aww, thanks so much Lin xxoo
Date: 12/15/2021 5:01:00 AM
Mike this is si so beautiful so romantic and I think you should market this idea of a 'love pillow' - I'm first in line to buy one! Into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/15/2021 5:09:00 AM
Aw, you are so sweet, Thanks Jan xxoo
Date: 12/15/2021 4:56:00 AM
Oh Mike that is so truly beautiful and romantic…” wake to smiles and sunshine” I love the sweet simplicity of that sentence! Just lovely! Debx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/15/2021 5:09:00 AM
Thanks so much Deb! I am so glad that you liked !!
Date: 12/15/2021 4:44:00 AM
Smiles of love--dreams in motion--lovely romantic revelry, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/15/2021 5:08:00 AM
Thank you Vijay - the king of romance!!