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Love Note To Pan

Close your eyes; take my hand; let yourself feel. I’ll be your Wendy if you’ll make it real! Fly me away to a dreamland that brings waterfall wishes on stars with no swings. Sept. 15, 2019 for Gregory Barden's Arbitrium Divisa 4 Poetry Contest This is the last quatrain of my poem, Waterfall Wishes on Stars With No Swings

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 12/18/2019 6:02:00 AM

Peter Pan is a huge part of my life, and this was just so joyous - it made my heart smile! Thank you so much for your participation in my contest, Andrea - congratulations on your win! Please forgive the lengthy wait for results. I hope you and yours have a joyous and bountiful holiday season - blessings, my friend! :o) <3

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/18/2019 6:30:00 AM

Ah, so poetic and wonderful. I often paint photos of Peter Pan, who always seemed like a female to me due to Mary Martin and Sandy Duncan.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/16/2019 12:01:00 AM

Very lovely Andrea. That full moon is messing with my computer and our T.V. too. My sister sent me three emails with pictures that are out there in cyberspace somewhere. She just called me and I blamed the moon. Lol xxoo

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/15/2019 8:05:00 PM

beautifully written stanza :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/15/2019 7:43:00 PM

So beautifully written, dear Wendy ;)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/15/2019 7:23:00 PM

A charming stanza..lovely poem, Andrea.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/15/2019 6:24:00 PM

I love all feelings Peter Pan fantasies give me and this is better than above par, it's top bar. I better think on this contest tonight. Still wide asleep on the street where I live. Love ... CayCay

Jan Allison

Date: 9/15/2019 6:07:00 PM

such sweet lines Andrea, good luck:-) hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/15/2019 4:58:00 PM

Lovely - Best wishes and blessings

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/15/2019 4:29:00 PM

this is lovely, andrea! best of luck in the contest...