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Love Note

Darling, It felt mundane, Our dressing up, Then driving off As evening glowed Its salmon hues Yet, once the maître d’ had edged Your chair into our table’s skirt, I felt as thrilled To clutch your hand And find that grin Upon your face As forty years ago. Much Love, September 11, 2017 Help Me Fall In Love Poetry Contest Mystic Rose, Sponsor

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Date: 9/14/2017 10:39:00 PM
Congratulations, David, on your win.
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Date: 9/14/2017 8:03:00 PM
Very charming and romantic, David, and wonderful to see those who are committed to marriage! (My folks just celebrated 68 years!) Blessings and congrats on your win! :-)
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Date: 9/11/2017 1:09:00 PM
Wonderful sentiment, I truly enjoyed this short but sweet piece.
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