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Love Note

Your face delights me.
When you flash that winsome smile
I am heaven bound.
Traveling this road with you;
this is all I'll ever need.



for contest "One Tanka-A Love Note"

Copyright © Deb Wilson | Year Posted 2013

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Poet Destroyer A

June 22, 2014 at 12:04 PM

Hi Deb, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by to view, every featured poem, on the soups Home Page. Take Care & Have Fun this coming week..... Luve Linda

Joanmarie Peranteau

June 20, 2014 at 8:42 AM

Beautiful... short, sweet and to the point. Congradulations....

June 20, 2014 at 8:42 AM

A winning smile for a winning piece! Congrats for having your work featured! ^_^

June 15, 2014 at 7:46 PM

What a beautiful love note Deb..congrats on it being featured... Hugs Tim

June 19, 2013 at 6:35 PM

Aww some smiles just do it! Good luck...

June 19, 2013 at 4:24 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Enjoyed reading this romantic work today..Thanks for the consoling words on Gail's Blog..Sara

June 19, 2013 at 5:24 AM

Very Romantic!

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