Love Note

Softly you kiss me
stirring I awake to you
safe in the knowledge
that here, in your arms I rest
passionate love overwhelms me

contest: one tanya - theme- love note  written 06/14/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Oyewole Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 11:53 PM
This is beautiful and lovable Shadow! I'll try writing one for the contest if it's not close. Well done.
Hamilton Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 8:39 AM
hi AO ty for your time glad you like it. My contest is closed and posted sorry. Shadow x smiles
Sirak Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 2:09 PM
Simply lovely
Hamilton Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 4:00 PM
Monterey Ty happy you liked it appreciate you reading Shadow x smile
A  Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 10:30 AM
I like the tanka, Shadow. a very nice little love note. I enjoyed the way your heart and mind are taking notes, during this overwhelming feeling. good luck in the contest. my newest favorite poet. I can't wait to make time and read more of your poems. Thank you for the nice comment on my poem. *luv ~ SKAT ~
Hamilton Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 10:56 AM
SKAT I am overwhelmed by your kindness ty so much Shadow x smiles
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