Love Note

The feelings i have for you are rare
there is nothing that can compare
To the feelings of sorrow
waiting till tomarrow
everyday we wait
I can not debate
How our lives will go
but everyone says theres a glow
In our smiles and our talk
As together we walk
down this scarry path we take
every special moment we make
will always be a special one
for me when our days are done
even though tomarrow comes and goes
my love for still and always flows
till our life come to and end
our love i will defend
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 4:28 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Pamela. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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April 8, 2011 at 9:02 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv... our contests are free to enter ..so please check them out and good luck with luv..
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April 8, 2011 at 4:03 PM
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Ince Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 2:18 PM
Loved it. great job(:
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April 8, 2011 at 12:20 PM
welcome to Poetry Soup and I enjoyed your poetry, thanks...judy
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April 8, 2011 at 11:00 AM
As this week draws to an end here I sit reading such wonderful poetry. I am happy yours is one of the ones I am reading today Pamela. I wish you a healthy, joyful, inspiration filled weekend. Love, Carol
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April 8, 2011 at 8:06 AM
Lovely expressions of love and its yearning, Pamela
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