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Love Note

The feelings i have for you are rare there is nothing that can compare To the feelings of sorrow waiting till tomarrow everyday we wait I can not debate How our lives will go but everyone says theres a glow In our smiles and our talk As together we walk down this scarry path we take every special moment we make will always be a special one for me when our days are done even though tomarrow comes and goes my love for still and always flows till our life come to and end our love i will defend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/11/2011 4:28:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Pamela. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/8/2011 9:02:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv... our contests are free to enter ..so please check them out and good luck with luv..
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Date: 4/8/2011 4:03:00 PM
Ive been reading your work and you are a great writer!! I'd like to invite you to.. www.poeticvoice.ning.com We are an online writing community that provides writers with the feedback, motivation, and advice needed to achieve their goals.The Poetic Voice Community is fast and easy to join, and you will not get lost in it's easy maneuvering features. We at Poetic Voice hope to grow as a community of friends. Our intention, and wish is to learn and share with others. I hope to see you there!
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Date: 4/8/2011 2:18:00 PM
Loved it. great job(:
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Date: 4/8/2011 12:20:00 PM
welcome to Poetry Soup and I enjoyed your poetry, thanks...judy
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Date: 4/8/2011 11:00:00 AM
As this week draws to an end here I sit reading such wonderful poetry. I am happy yours is one of the ones I am reading today Pamela. I wish you a healthy, joyful, inspiration filled weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/8/2011 8:06:00 AM
Lovely expressions of love and its yearning, Pamela
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