Love Never Sleeps

My mind has gone crazy without any sleep 
Running on empty with these hours I keep 
If I don't get to bed soon, I might explode 
But all that I am after is to crack your code
 
I've already gotten, the key to your heart 
Right now I'm not interested in that part 
What I want, is to get this zipper undone 
Baby, wake up, it's time to have some fun
 
The candles are burning, the wax soon will be hot 
The rope's on the night stand, come tie me in knots 
Pillage and plunder, strip me down to my core 
Treat me with disdain, make me feel like a whore 

Time to get raw, get real, to lose the disguise
Want me completely, the sex's in your eyes 
Sleep can wait, but why put our marriage on hold 
Keep the thrill alive baby, that is what we are told

So wake up baby, our stars are going to shine. 
Your body, give it to me, and I'll give you mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/27/2014 6:31:00 PM
great to read this again my friends:-) Hugs and many congrats:-) Jan xx
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Date: 12/27/2014 12:46:00 AM
CT DUET, Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. Sorry, it took this long to post the winning poems. Stop by my latest blog "A Woman's Gift" if you'd like. Enjoy life and the Holidays. :) Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/29/2014 11:30:00 PM
Very good poem, with a perfect title.
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Date: 9/4/2014 12:06:00 PM
Excellent write and I know exactly who wrote what. I can even see little adjustments by one or the other. love you both this is such a great write i added to my favs i suggest you both do the same and Jan if she hasn't already. So we can get it more exposure.
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/4/2014 12:27:00 PM
Thank you my friend... Yes that is true....we have written about 40 pieces together.... You would be surprised who wrote what.....soupmail me and I'll tell you if your right
Date: 9/3/2014 2:20:00 PM
ooeeerrr Cas and Tim hot and steammmyyyyy - I can see Tim was tied up and forced to write this LOL. Makes my poem look like a kids write LOL hugs Jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2014 3:00:00 PM
I agree Tim we never kiss and tell LOl:-) Hugs to you both Jan xxx
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Ct Duet
Date: 9/3/2014 2:37:00 PM
We will never tell who wrote which part :) ......A brilliant poet stated that once.....hugs and love Cas and Tim :-)
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